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Myself graduate the after first work am hold an office in an telecommunication wholesale trading company, but the position is the market sells director, the primary interest is responsible to wholesale and the promoted portable telephone and the related fitting! In office during, I need with the different customer discussion cooperation matters concerned, when but has the new product promotes the market condition, I need to be responsible to contact various media, in order to promote the new product. Myself leave this company most to want the reason am, myself hoped attempts other thing and the profession!!
之後本人便進入了現在的公司工作,從2000年至現在,在這公司任職了7年有多.這是一間規模不太大的製衣貿易公司,而我是負責跟單和船務的工作,需要時更會跟客戶開會相討合作事宜,亦須定期到大陸工幹,確保貨物由生產到運送到客戶手上的期間,所有相關需要都準備好 .由於這間公司將會在下月底,把香港的總部遷移在大陸,而本人則不慾長駐內地,所以另覓新工作 !

本人自從第一次到貴公司面試後,再加上本人瀏覽過貴公司之網業,發現貴公司的商業概念很真誠和有效率,從而令我很希望能有機會於貴公司工作,能為貴公司效勞 !

本人畢業後的第一份工作就是在一間電訊批發貿易公司內任職,而職位就是市場銷售主任,主要職責就是負責批發和推廣手提電話與相關配件 !於在職其間,我需要與不同的客戶洽談合作事宜,而每當有新產品推出市面時,我更需要負責聯絡各媒體,以便推廣新的產品.本人離開該公司的最要原因是,本人希望嘗試別的東西和行業 !!

之後本人便進入了現在的公司工作,從2000年至現在,在這公司任職了7年有多.這是一間規模不太大的製衣貿易公司,而我是負責跟單和船務的工作,需要時更會跟客戶開會相討合作事宜,亦須定期到大陸工幹,確保貨物由生產到運送到客戶手上的期間,所有相關需要都準備好 .由於這間公司將會在下月底,把香港的總部遷移在大陸,而本人則不慾長駐內地,所以另覓新工作 !



本人自從第一次到貴公司面試後,再加上本人瀏覽過貴公司之網業,發現貴公司的商業概念很真誠和有效率,從而令我很希望能有機會於貴公司工作,能為貴公司效勞 !
(Myself graduate the after first work am am in office in between an telecommunication wholesale trading company, but the position is the market sells director, the primary interest is responsible to wholesale and the promoted portable telephone and the related fitting! To in office during, I need with the different customer discussion cooperation matters concerned, but when has the new product promotes the market condition, I need to be responsible to contact various media, in order to promotes the new product Myself leave this company most to want the reason am, myself hoped attempts other thing and the profession! ! Myself then enter the present company to work afterwards, from 2000 to the present, was for in office 7 years in this company to have. are many This is a scale not too big system clothes trading company, when I am is responsible for the freight bill and the ship service work, the need can hold a meeting with the customer to ask for the cooperation matters concerned, also must regularly do to the mainland labor, guarantees the cargo from to produce to ships to customer on period, all correlations need all to prepare As a result of this the company will be able in the end of next month, Hong Kong's headquarters migration in the mainland, but myself will not want long to be stationed the inland, therefore will seek the new work in addition! Myself since first time interview after your firm, in addition myself have glanced over net of industry the your firm, discovered your firm the commercial concept is very sincere and effectiveness, thus makes me to hope very much can have the opportunity to your firm work, can work for your firm! )

Myself graduate the after during first work am am in office in an telecommunication wholesale trading company, but the position is the market sells director, the primary interest is responsible to wholesale and the promoted portable telephone and the related fitting! To in office during, I need with the different customer discussion cooperation matters concerned, but when has the new product promotes the market condition, I need to be responsible to contact various media, in order to promotes the new product Myself leave this company most to want the reason am, myself hoped attempts other thing and the profession! ! Myself then enter the present company to work afterwards, from 2000 to the present, was for in office 7 years in this company to have. are many This is a scale not too big system clothes trading company, when I am is responsible for the freight bill and the ship service work, the need can hold a meeting with the customer to ask for the cooperation matters concerned, also must regularly do to the mainland labor, guarantees the cargo from to produce to ships to customer on period, all correlations need all to prepare As a result of this the company will be able in the end of next month, Hong Kong's headquarters migration in the mainland, but myself will not want long to be stationed the inland, therefore will seek the new work in addition! Myself since first time interview after your firm, in addition myself have glanced over net of industry the your firm, discovered your firm the commercial concept is very sincere and effectiveness, thus makes me to hope very much can have the opportunity to your firm work, can work for your firm!

Myself graduate the after first work am hold an office in an telecommunication wholesale trading company, but the position is the market sells director, the primary interest is responsible to wholesale and the promoted portable telephone and the related fitting! In office during, I need with the different customer discussion cooperation matters concerned, when but has the new product promotes the market condition, I need to be responsible to contact various media, in order to promote the new product. Myself leave this company most to want the reason am, myself hoped attempts other thing and the profession!! Afterwards myself then enter the present company to work, from 2000 to the present, held an office for 7 years in this company to have many. This is a scale not too big system clothes trading company, when I am is responsible for the freight bill and the shipping work, the need can hold a meeting with the customer to ask for the cooperation matters concerned, also must do regularly to the mainland labor, guarantees the cargo from to produce to ships to customer on period, all correlations need all to prepare. As a result of this company will be able in the end of next month, Hong Kong's headquarters migration in the mainland, but myself will not want long to be stationed inland, therefore will seek the new work in addition! Myself since first time interview after your firm, in addition myself have glanced over net of industry your firm, discovered your firm the commercial concept is very sincere and effectiveness, thus makes me to hope very much can have the opportunity in your firm work, can work for your firm.

2007-05-04 20:46:41 補充：
本人畢業後的第一份工作就是在一間電訊批發貿易公司內任職,而職位就是市場銷售主任,主要職責就是負責批發和推廣手提電話與相關配件 !於在職其間,我需要與不同的客戶洽談合作事宜,而每當有新產品推出市面時,我更需要負責聯絡各媒體,以便推廣新的產品.本人離開該公司的最要原因是,本人希望嘗試別的東西和行業 !!

2007-05-04 20:47:04 補充：
之後本人便進入了現在的公司工作,從2000年至現在,在這公司任職了7年有多.這是一間規模不太大的製衣貿易公司,而我是負責跟單和船務的工作,需要時更會跟客戶開會相討合作事宜,亦須定期到大陸工幹,確保貨物由生產到運送到客戶手上的期間,所有相關需要都準備好 .由於這間公司將會在下月底,把香港的總部遷移在大陸,而本人則不慾長駐內地,所以另覓新工作 ! 本人自從第一次到貴公司面試後,再加上本人瀏覽過貴公司之網業,發現貴公司的商業概念很真誠和有效率,從而令我很希望能有機會於貴公司工作,能為貴公司效勞 !

2007-05-04 20:47:33 補充：
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