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The specialest thing I have is a necklace. Although it looks like any oridinary necklace, there is a very special story behind it.

My mother has many friends, her best friend's daughter, Michaelia, had cancer. When I was young, my mother brought me to her home; she lived in Shenzhen. There she played with me and taught me how to play the piano.

A few days passed, I needed to return to Hong Kong. But before I left ,she gave me her necklace and said 'I give this to you because you are my only friend. I have another one similar to this one. Please keep it as well as you can .'

Then I brought the necklace back to Hong Kong. Althought she died 3 years ago, I will always remember her in my mind .

The most special thing for me is to see the necklace. In fact, it looks just like a common necklace, but it has a speical story behind it.

My mother has many friends. Her best friend's daughter is called Michaelia and she had cancer. When I was young, my mother brought me to her home. She lived in Shenzhen. She played with me and taught me how to play the piano. A few days went pass and I needed to go back to Hong Kong. Before I left, she gave me the necklace and said 'I am giving it to you because you are my only friend. I have another necklace that is similar to this one. Please keep it as well as you can.' Then I brought this necklace back to Hong Kong. Althought she died 3 years ago, I will remember her forever.

2007-05-02 23:22:21 補充：
No such word as "specialest" Should be "Most special"
Wouldn't start a sentence with: "There" (eg there she played with me)
Sentence structure incorrect: A few days passed, I needed to return to Hong Kong.
Not sure if "as well as you can" is correct

In fact ,it just looks like a common necklace ,but is has a speical story behind.

My mother has many friends ,her best friend, Michaelia, had a cancer.

When I was young. My mother brought me to her home .She lived in Shenzhen. She played with me and taught me how to play piano .

A few days passed ,I needed to return back to Hong Kong .Before I left ,she gave the necklace to me and said ' I give it to you because you are my only friend .I have another necklace which is similar to this one. Please keep it as well as you can .'

Then I brought this necklace to Hong Kong . Although she died 3 years ago, I will remember her in my mind .

=)

2007-05-01 17:31:55 補充：
My mother has many friends. However, her best friend, Michaelia, had cancer.呢句先岩=]