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2007-05-01 8:29 am
今天十点起身, 跟住洗面刷牙段,十点三十分出門口.
我買了一份報紙 , 跟住去了一間快餐店食早餐.
食完早餐後 , 我就坐車回家 , 去到巴士站的時候,見到我的朋友 Peter , 他在超級市場買東西.

Today got up at 10am.After washed face and brushed tooth.
I left from home at 10:30.
I bought newspaper and then I went to restaurant for breakfast.
I was backed home by bus. When I arrived bus stop. I saw my friend Peter. He had been buying something in the market.

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2007-05-01 8:51 am
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I got up at 10 am this morning. After I washed my face and brushed my teeth, I left home at 10.30. I first bought my newspaper, then I went to have breakfast at a fast food shop.
After that, I went home by bus. I met my friend Peter at the bus-stop, who just finished some shopping at the supermarket.
2007-05-01 10:01 am
I woke up at 10 am this morning, I washed my face and burshed my tooth right away, and I left from home at 10:30pm.
I bought a newspaper and went to a restaurant had my breakfast. I would like to take a bus go home, While i am watitng for the bus at the bus stop, I saw Peter shopping at the supermaket.


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