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Every august, we have a family gathering to celebrate my mother's and grandfather's birthday, which fall on the sixth and thirteenth of the month. There are too many of us that we can't fit in anyone's house. (My grandparents have eight children, and each of them, with the exception of my mother, have no less than five kids. By the time you count all of us, you'll have nearly 150 people.) Therefor, we have to hold the family gathering in a park. After we eat, there will be a basketball game for the teenagers. The grown-ups will play cards and chat, while the little ones play tag.

Every August we have a family get-together to honor my mother and grandfather,
we係我們, 所以應have

whose birthdays fall on the sixth and thirtheenth of the month. We can't have it at
除非母親和祖父同一日生日, 否則應用birthdays fall

anyone's house; there is too many of us. My grandparents have eight childen,
us 係數得, 所以用many
grandparents係眾數, 所以用have

and each of them, with the exception of my mother, has no less than five.
each係單數, 所以用has

By the time you count us all up, you have nearly 150 people. We have to have the family gathering at a park.
you無論單數或眾數, 都無s
We 係眾數, 用have

After we get through eating, there are a basketball game for the teenagers.The grown-ups play cards and chat, and the little ones plays tag.
we 係眾數, 應用get

Every August we have a family get-together to honor my mother and grandfather, Whose brithday falls on the sixth and thirtheenth of the month. We can't have it at anyone's house; there is too many of us. My grandparents have eight childen, and each of them, with the exception of my mother, has no less than five. By the time you count us all up, you have nearly 150 people. We have to have the family gathering at a park.
After we get through eating, there are a basketball game for the teenagers.The grown-ups play cards and chat, and the little ones plays tag.

In every August, we are having a family gathering to celebrate the birthdays of my
mother and grandfather on which are 13th and 16th respectively. The gathering can't be taken place at any family member's house as there are too many participants.My grandparents have eight children and each of them do have more than 5 children except my mother who doesn't have. If all the family members come up together, it should be at about 150 persons and only a park is deemed fit being the location for family gathering.

As usual, there will be a basketball game amongst the teenagers after the dinner. Apart from this, the adults will play cards or chat with one another whereas the infants will play the tag

Every year on August, we will have a family gathering for celebrating my mother and grandfather's birthday. Their birthdays are on sixth and thirteenth of August respectively. Normally, gathering place is at a park, not at anyone's house. This is because of my big family group. My grandparent has eight children and then each of them (except my mother) has five or more children. If you will count these up, you will know that my family has about 150 people.

After dinner on that day, young members will group together to play basketball. Old members will play card and chatting. The little kids will play tag.

Every August we have a family get-together to honor my mother and grandfather, Whose brithday falls on the sixth and thirtheenth of the month. We can't have it at anyone's house; there is too manyof us. My grandparents have eight childen, and each of them, with the exception of my mother, has no less than five. By the time you count us all up, you have nearly 150 people. We have to have the family gathering at a park.

*are you the composer of the above paragraph? I really dun get your meaning as the word you used are very hard to be understood.