英文高手請進(急!10P)

試用樓上的例子做例，各人勿見怪：
Treasure thy in possession before it blinks.
意境簡單到題。

2007-04-27 17:57:45 補充：
現代人的話是Treasure your possession before it blinks.全部是抽象東西， simple present tense便足夠。

2007-04-27 18:00:37 補充：
這是我經常強調的，譯文要簡單到題。

2007-05-05 00:21:21 補充：
負評的人心態很有問題！

Cherish (treasure/ appreciate) what you have (possess) now, as they may (before they) vanish (disappear) away in a split second.

Treasure whatever you have at the moment, as these things may disappear in a split second.

CHERISH WHAT ARE IN YOUR POSSESSION AS THEY WILL VANISH IN A SPLIT
SECOND

treasure what you have now, because parhaps this things will disappear in a blink

treasure what you have now, because they will disappear in a blink

2007-04-27 17:06:51 補充：
對唔住！這樣譯會比較清楚treasure what you now have, because they will disappear in a blink.

2007-04-27 17:08:45 補充：
對唔住！看漏了個可能treasure whay you now have, because they may disappear in a blink