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This is a very nice writing that you have submitted about your weekend.
Please have a look at the corrections I have fixed for you,
sometimes the hardest mistakes to see are the little ones like the prepositions and the articles.
Keep up the excellent work and keep practicing your writing because the more you practice the more your work will continue to improve.
這是您遞交了關於您的週末的非常好的文字。
請看一看一我固定了為您的更正,
最堅硬的差錯有時看見是小孩子像介詞和文章。
保留優秀工作和繼續實踐您的文字,因為您更實踐更多您的工作將繼續改善。