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What happened at the end of the film? What have you learnt from this film?
Today I'm going to talk about the film Ladder 49. This is the film of the poster. Let me tell you first the plot, and then I talk about what happened at the end of the film, and finally what I learn from this film.
The film is about Jack. He is a fireman. During fire-fighting, he is in danger. A big wood is suddenly falling down to him. At the moment, he recalls his experience from his life. When a general fireman becomes a standout hero. He believes that every cloud has a silver lining. Finally, his team's leader tries hard to rescue jack.
When fire breaks out, everybody want to flee for their life! Only fireman will go inside and put out the fire. They have nothing in their mind but only fire-fighting and rescuing people.
So to sum up, this is a great film, and I learn a lot from it.
Thank you very much!!!

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Good afternoon, ladies and gentlemen. Today I would like to share with you my thoughts on the film Ladder 49. (This is the film of the poster) 呢句唔明你想講乜??. In a moment, I'll go through the plot, what happened at the end of the film, and what I've learnt from this film.

Ladder 49 is about Jack, who is a fireman. During a fire-fighting mission, he faces great danger when a big wooden block suddenly falls down onto him. At the same time, he recollects the experiences of his life and his belief that any fireman can become a hero.
His motto is "Every cloud has a silver lining". In the end, his team leader puts in a great effort to rescue jack.

What I've learnt from this film is that ______________ (係咪應該講講學到 d 乜?). This film shows the reality that when a fire alarm goes off, what is in everybody's mind is only to flee for his or her own life! This leaves the situation solely to the hands of firemen, whose only intention is to put out the fire and rescue the people.

To sum it up, this is a great film and I have learnt a lot from watching it.
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Thank you very much!!!


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