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似係作緊投訴信喎...如果係的話第一段應該要道明來意,如:"I write to complain about what we saw on in the ",而第二段內容先到你o既第一段。但我唔改你啦,你自己睇下合唔合用。
[ ] 號裏面係我建議加/改o既野。
My friend and I went to the library yesterday[, and we saw some improper behaviours].
Firstly, there was a child who was drawing on the books page after page, and his mother was actually praising his drawing. [呢度你應該有 elaboration]
Second, I saw two student[s] tearing pages off reference books. Although they might be working on their project, their behaviour was extremely selfish and was a damage to public property.
Besides, there was a man was making unbearable noises which were annoying. And we saw a woman eating as she read. [Those] were all selfish and inconsiderate behaviours which made it hard for us to concentrate on our reading.
I suggest [giving warnings] to them, and putting up a notice which announces a penalty [to those who violate the library regulations].