12.1 bicycle 請問這段英文,文法上有錯誤嗎? 會考用的,請指點指點 thank you very much.

..... at the xx in the KCR Station. We were both very happy.....

Suggestion:
It was a bright sunny day. I got up early in the morning and met James in front of the KCR Station. We were both thrill as there were not too many people around.

I got up early and found that it was a sunny day. I decided to meet James at the*****in the KCR station. Both of us were very happy because there were not too many passengers.

It was a clear and fine morning. I got up early and met James in the KCR station. We both were happy to find that there were few people in this nice early morning.

SUNNY => It is about logic, you woke up early, but found it sunny? So you mean you normally wake up by 2:00pm ?

In the KCR station, not in KCR station, you need an indefinite article THE.

Suggest you to avoid the word NOT, to make sentence easy to read.

2007-04-25 22:10:11 補充：
It was a clear and fine morning. I got up early and met James in the KCR station. We both were happy to find that there were few people in this nice early morning.這是一個清爽, 明亮的早晨。 我一早起床, 約了James 在火車站會合。 我們發現, 在這美好的早晨, 只有很少人在車站裏。

你所用的是過去式, I got up early 應該寫成 I woke up early, 因為got up打扮;裝飾的意思o

at the *****in KCR station, 如果係 at the 7-eleven in KCR station that's correct
或者 at mongkok kcr station (不需要the 及 in)

We both were very happy as there were not too many people.
we both 應該寫成 both of us,
but there 你是指 at the *****in KCR station 的地方不多人嗎?

2007-04-21 15:36:05 補充：
改寫成:It was a sunny day. I woke up early and met James at Mongkok KCR station. Both of us were very happy to shop around as there is not crowded.Happy ( at/about)][ to-v][ that]

2007-04-21 15:37:38 補充：
Sorry for my typing mistake: Both of us were very happy to shop around as there was not crowded. (not is 呀)