3.1 請問這段英文,文法上有錯誤嗎? 會考用的,請指點指點 thank you very much.

The peak is a good place where attract many tourists to visit. At night, you can see a spectacular view of harbor. Also you need^to not to worry about the transports, because it is very convenient to get there.

line 1: attract>attracts
line 2: Also (won't be used for the beginning of a sentence)
you need not to worry about (seems to be chinglish > chinese english)
line 3: convenient to get there (oral is ok, but for written english which is not proper enough)

for your information:

The Peak is one of the tourist attractions where you could enjoy spectaular harbour view. It is quite accessible for you to arrive to the Peak because there are a lot of public transits.

The Peak is a good spot where attracts many tourists. At night, you can see a spectacular view of the Harbor. Also, you need not x(to) worry about the transports, because it is very convenient to get there.

我覺得 .. Also you need not to worry about the transports 可以變做 .. Also you are no need to worry about the transports