1.2 請問這段英文,文法上有錯誤嗎? 會考用的,請指點指點 thank you very much.

The short paragraph is grammatically correct except " ... information about [our or the] school...", i.e. there should be an article or pronoun to qualify the " school ". Whether " school website " or " school's website " is OK.

Or you may wish to refer to my version as follows:

If you wish to know more about our school, please visit its website which contains more information on our school such as its history, vision and mission, facilities, subjects taught, etc.

Help the above helps. :-)

If you do like to learn more about our school, you can browse through our official school website. You can find the school history, different types of facilities and subjects offered.

The tone is not correct. You should use conditional type, rather than a polite request. I will write " If you to know more about our school, you can browse our school website. You can find information about school such as history, facilities and subjects"

文法上browse our school website錯左, 可以改做browse the website of our school

如果我寫, 我會寫成 If you would like to recognize our school more, you can browse the website of our school. In the website, there is much information about the school, such as, history, facilities and subjects.

In our website, you can explore more information such as the history, the facilities and the subjects of our school if you want to know our school more.