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Moreover, we can observe that every athlete shows various admirable sportsmanship during the competition, for instance, enthusiastic participation, seizing every second and minute, immortal unyielding and mutual friendship. Also, those schoolmates who are starring and yelling at the athletes get excited from time to time in a cordial atmosphere.





please change the main verbs into past tense if you are intended to write an event~~~
if you are describing a picture, present tense is better~~~

Moreover, we could see every athelete having a different kinds of performance in the competition. There are warm participation, seizing every second and minute, unyielding is immortal without making mutal spirit, making the schoolmates who are watching the competition in the field are anxious for them.