20point 英文問題！

Lam Tin Tak Tin Estate parking lot, yesterday early morning five o'clock occur vertical burns down the vehicle document, a private vehicle strangely cooks meals, emits the thick smoke, the fire fighter arrives the fire extinguishes, only the entire compartment obtained doubts once carries the flammable liquid glue back (to see chart), in addition the fire intensity spread quickly, thought the fire-alarm cause had the suspiciousness, handed over the police to take over

There was a fire broke out at 5 o'clock yesterday morning at the Car Park of Tak Tin Estate, Lam Tin. A private car caught fire with unknown cause, and heavy smoke emitted out from the car. Firemen arrived there and got the fire extinguished. They found a bottle that used to store flammable liquid was found in the car's compartment(shown as photo). As the fire was spreading very fast, it was believed that there were some suspicious points, and the case has passed over to the police.

"藍田德田村" is an public housing estate in Lam Tin, and it is not a village.
I was graduated from a secondary school in Lam Tin.
It is still situated in Lam Tin now.

2007-04-20 23:40:16 補充：
I was graduated from a secondary school in Lam Tin.It is a an English Secondary School(Band 1).

2007-04-21 01:00:31 補充：
Excuse me, "藍田德田村" is an public housing estate in Lam Tin should be wriiten as"藍田德田村" is a public housing estate in Lam Tin.

Lam Tin Tak Tin Estate car park, there was an arson of car burned case, a private car was fired strangely, oozed dense smoke, the firemen arrived locale and snuffed out the fire, due to the entire compartment obtained carrying flammable liquid plastic vessel (image), and also the fire spreaded quickly, thought this fire case caused doubtful, gave the police to went on.

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中文:

"藍田德田村停車場,昨清晨五時發生縱火燒車案,一輛私家車離奇起火,冒出濃煙,消防員到場把火熄滅,惟全個車廂檢獲疑曾載易燃液體膠樽(見圖),加上火勢蔓延得快,認為火警起因有可疑,交警方接手。"

英文:

" Lantian Germany's field village parking lot, yesterday early morning five o'clock occur vertical burns down the vehicle document, a private vehicle strangely cooks meals, emits the thick smoke, the fire fighter arrives the fire extinguishes, only the entire compartment obtained doubts once carries the flammable liquid glue back (to see chart), in addition the fire intensity spread quickly, thought the fire-alarm cause had the suspiciousness, handed over the police to take over. "

"Lantian Germany's field village parking lot, yesterday early morning five o'clock occur vertical burns down the vehicle document, a private vehicle strangely cooks meals, emits the thick smoke, the fire fighter arrives the fire extinguishes, only the entire compartment obtained doubts once carries the flammable liquid glue back (to see chart), in addition the fire intensity spread quickly, thought the fire-alarm cause had the suspiciousness, handed over the police to take over."