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2007-04-21 4:42 am
幫我用英文轉左去..要past時式

佢地排隊入左巴士 , 但係有個人推開左其中一個人 , 到左佢地上車啦 , 但係車長說 沒有坐位了 , 下一班車再搭過 因為尼件事搞到佢地好唔開心 佢地到左3點半先上車 , 但佢地出發後見到先前果一架車壞左 , 佢地一齊講 再見啦
尼一天佢地好開心


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回答 (5)

2007-04-21 4:51 am
✔ 最佳答案
They queued for a bus, but a man pushed an another man. When they boarded the bus, driver said that there had no more seat and please take the another bus, so they were unhappy by this thing. They got on the bus at 3:30, but they saw the bus before have been hanged and they said bye. They felt happy on this day.
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2007-04-21 7:15 am
They queued up for the bus, but somebody pushed away from one of them. And when it was their turn to get onto the bus, the driver said that the bus was full and suggested them to take the next bus. Because of this incident, they were very uphappy. They waited for the bus until half past 3, but when they were travelling on the bus, they saw that the bus before which they didn't get on was broke down. They said farewell to each other. They were very happy at that day.
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2007-04-21 6:00 am
They queued for a bus, but there was a person pushed away one of them. When they got onto the bus, the bus driver said that the bus was full, so they needed to take the next one. Due to this incident, they were very unhappy. They waited for a bus until half past 3, and they were on the bus for a moment, they saw the past one which they could not get on was broken down. They said farewell together to that bus. They were very happy this day.

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2007-04-21 4:58 am
They queued up for the bus, but somebody pushed away one of them. And when it was their turn to get on to the bus, the driver said the bus was full and suggested them to take the next bus. Because of this incident, they were very uphappy. They waited for the bus until half past 3, and when they were on the bus, they saw that the bus before which they didn't get on was broken down. They farewell each other. They were very happy today.
2007-04-21 4:52 am
They queued up for the bus, but somebody pushed away one of them. And when it was their turn to get on to the bus, the driver said the bus was full and suggested them to take the next bus. Because of this incident, they were very uphappy. They waited for the bus until half past 3, and when they were on the bus, they saw that the bus before which they didn't get on was broken down. They farewell each other. They were very happy today.
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