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Since March is the low season for the traditional retail industry, the total sales volume has thus been affected by the quarterly declination. The recorded sales volume for this month is Hk xxxxx
Too many mistakes for 波波橙 and terry94361472.... sorry, guys.
- Low season is more common than non-peak season
- Incorrect logic to use "in spite of low season .... sales dropping". In spite of = although. Please note.
- Cannot use dropping, because it is a continuously tense. You have the record already, how can you say it is dropping ?
- "Because" normally will not be use in the beginning of a sentence. 由於 = Since.
- "Trade off" means ...example : If you want to smoke, you have a higher chance to get Cancer, that is a trade off.
- "falls the influence the quarter" .... big gammer mistake. You can say "falls in the quarter" or "falls and being influenced in the quarter"...
- "this month of record" ... another gammer mistake.... You can say "record of this month" or "this month's record".