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2007-04-20 7:01 am
On the side in award item aspect, we have champion, second place, third place. The classmates for the sake of these medals, all fall the game of the power. But it this year, we also have not the individual entire audience total champion. In these, we also felt has some disappointed. But the school have authorities promise, will increase this award in the future. Therefore, we are to expect very much the nest year of the sport day.

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2007-04-20 1:25 pm
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Sorry呀,唔係太明你段野既意思,我都係靠估,有d位我幫你重寫一下啦:

Our awards ranged from the first to third only and for the sake of these medals, my classmates drained their very last drop of strength. Nevertheless, my class could not become the overall champion this year and because of this, we felt a little disappointed. However, the authorities of the school promised that they will increase the range/number of awards in the future, setting us on to look forward to the game next year.


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