幫下我啊（今晚１０點之前）

2007-04-20 3:14 am

就係：
（課室還可以令我們和老師多一些溝通，令我們在學習上更容易，所以我很喜歡學校的課室。第二，就是學校的操場，因為可以舉行各式各樣的體育比賽，娛樂大家。而我亦喜歡在學校的操場參與球類活動，例如：藍球和手球等。操場更是早會的地方，讓學生知道學校的事務，所以我認為操場也是我最喜愛的地方。第三，就是電腦室，因為學生在空閒時可以上網瀏覽資訊，擴闊學生的視野，令同學對資訊科技更加了解。最重要的是，電腦室可以協助同學做功課和專題報告。最後我希望學校可以擴建大一些，令學生有一個舒適的環境學習。）
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2007-04-20 3:52 am

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You can choose whether to use the words in brakets.... hope it helps :]

(In first place,)I like the school’s classroom the most, because its peaceful atmosphere is the best place for students to learn and to communicate with the teachers.

(Secondly,) The school’s playground is where various sport competitions take place. It is the centre of all entertainment and excitement in the whole school. I personally enjoy sports activities such as, basketball and dodge ball in the playground. Furthermore, the playground is where the school’s assembly take place every morning, it is where we gather together as a community and learn about the school’s fascinating current events. Therefore, the playground is also one of my favourite places in the school.

Another place where I like visiting in the school is the Computer room, it is a place where we can surf the Internet during our free time, in order to broaden our horizon, as well as learning more about information and computer technology (ICT). Most importantly, the Computer room is where students can do their studies and projects.

Lastly, I hope the school could expand and invest even more facilities in order to provide students with a more comfortable environment for study.

參考: i study in the UK

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