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2007-04-19 8:11 pm
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題目: If you can choose 2 TV program,what will you choose?

If I can choose 2 TV program,I will choose news and cartoon.I choose news because I can know about what things has happened in the world and increase my knowledge.I choose cartoon because it is funny and I can relax at my free time.

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2007-04-19 8:31 pm
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基本上寫得沒有錯但文筆要稍為修飾才能配合英語的文法
If I can choose 2 TV program,I will (like to )choose news and cartoon.
(First of all),I choose news because I can knowwhat things has happened( about) in the world ,and ( also can) increase my knowledge(too) .
(Secondly),I choose cartoon because it is ( so) funny and (it) can (make me )relax at my (leisure) time.
2007-04-19 8:34 pm
幫你改左
If I can choose 2 TV programs, I will choose news and cartoon. The reason I choose news is that I can know about how are things going on in the world and increase my common sense knowledge. I also choose cartoon because it is funny and the programs can relax me. But it will not be good if I watch cartoons most of the time. Perhaps a little bit of cartoon is enough for me.
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2007-04-19 8:31 pm
If I can choose 2 TV program,I will chose News and Cartoons.It is because News can let us know what happened in the world and increase our knowledge.I choose Cartoon because it is funny and it can relaxed on the free time.
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2007-04-19 8:24 pm
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