各位英文老師請幫我看看以下句子的文化對不對....thx

1. 正確
2. Your Octopus card has depleted in value.
3. Your Octopus card carries insufficient value.

唔知係咪香港人講慣廣東話既關係，以英文黎講八達通內既價值唔係”錢”黎架，只係”價值”，所以要用value，唔係money

4. I lost my wallet 一定要指定一個或者邊個既wallet架，如果冇指定，I lost a wallet
5. 唔係好明，你係咪想講上錯車？
Sir, I am afraid you have got on the wrong bus.
6. 係咪想講上車時俾車費？pay money first係就咁”俾錢先”咋喎
Sir, please pay your fare on boarding.

英文唔同廣東話，要叫人俾”車費”，唔係叫人俾”錢”架，如果唔係好冇禮貌

7. 我估你既意思係： How many of you are boarding?
8. You should have alighted at the last stop/station. 巴士／電車用stop，地鐵用station
9. 你想叫佢等佢下車之後再問人，定係叫佢而家落車去問人？
如果第一個意思：
Sorry, I have no idea. Please ask others when you have alighted.
第二個意思：
Sorry, I have no idea. Please alight here and ask others.

2007-04-18 20:22:30 補充：
睇返原來我睇漏眼，即係同Pansy既差唔多：第一句應該係：Sir, you haven't paid for it. 或者： Sir, you haven't paid. 請刪去不必要既 yet

1 correct
2 your Octopus card HAS no value LEFT IN IT (if you don't add 'left in it', it implies the card has no use at all)
3 your Octopus card RAN OUT OF MONEY (even though it isn't actual money as someone said before, it is still valid to say 'the card has ran out of money')
4 even though it is technically okay, but I HAVE lost my wallet is better
5 sir, you HAVE got the wrong bus
6 sir, you HAVE TO/MUST pay FOR THE FARE first
7 how many passengers (are there)?
8 you should have gotten off at the last stop
9 i'm not sure, please ask someone else off the bus

1. sir,you haven't paid it yet
> Sir, you haven't paid FOR it yet OR
Sir, you haven't paid yet.

Ref: http://dictionary.cambridge.org/define.asp?key=58172&dict=CALD

2. your Octopus card no value.
> Your Octopus card has run out of value.

註﹕"has run out of" 意指已經耗盡/用完
Ref: http://www.octopuscards.com/consumer/payment/reload/en/aavs.jsp
"Your Octopus card has no value"意思錯誤，變成"你的八達通卡無價值"

3. your Octopus card not enough money.
> Your Octopus card doesn't have enough value.

4. I lost wallet.
> I lost my wallet.
註﹕這是過去式，陳述過去發生的事。如果你剛發現銀包唔見o左，想講俾人知，通常用現在完成式present perfect tense, 即"I've (I have) lost my wallet."

5. sir, you got the wrong bus.
> Sir, you've (you have) got on the wrong bus.
註﹕
- got是過去式，陳述過去發生的事。如果你想講俾人知你o岩o岩上錯車，通常用現在完成式present perfect tense, 即"U've (you have) got."
- 上車是get on a 交通工具
see: http://dictionary.cambridge.org/define.asp?key=97577&dict=CALD

6. sir, you pay money first.
> Sir, you need to pay first.
註﹕通常講俾錢，pay已經是understood, 唔駛講pay money

7. 你有幾多人乘車.
> How many of you are travelling? OR
How many of you are taking the bus / train? OR
How many of you need to take a taxi?...
視乎你咩情形講呢句o野....

8. 你應該在上一站下車.
> You should get off the train at the next station.（如是火車） OR
Your should get off the bus at the next stop. （如指巴士）

9. 我不清楚,你下車問其他人,
> I'm not sure. Please ask other people when you should get off the bus / train.

我改左啦,,,,,7-9係唔係要變eng?

1. sir,you haven't paid for it yet
2. 5明
3. your Octopus card has not enough money.
4. no problem
5. no problem
6. sir, you should pay money first.
7. How many people will take the car?
8. You should get off at the previous station.
9. I'm not sure. You can ask others.

3. your Octopus card not enough money.
6. sir, you pay money first.
這些句子錯了!

1. sir,you haven't paid it yet. -- correct!
2. your Octopus card no value. -- your Octopus card HAS no value.
3. your Octopus card not enough money. -- your Octopus card HAS not enough money.

4. I lost wallet. -- I have lost my wallet.
5. sir, you got the wrong bus. -- Sir, I'm afraid you've got on the wrong bus.
6. sir, you pay money first. - Sir, please pay money first.
7. 你有幾多人乘車. - How many people will take the car?
8. 你應該在上一站下車. - You should alight at the last station.
9. 我不清楚,你下車問其他人, - Sorry, I'm not sure, you may ask the other people after you got off.

1. Sir,you haven't paid it yet.
2. Your Octopus card no values.
3. Your Octopus card not enough moneys.
4. I lost a wallet.
5. Sir, you get the wrong bus.
6. Sir, you pay money first.
7. 這裡有幾多人乘車?
8. 你應該在上一站下車.
9. 我不清楚你的問題,請你問其他人吧,

2. your Octopus card has no value.
3. your Octopus card do not have enough money.
4. I lost my wallet.
6. sir, you should pay first.