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The opening ceremony marked the official commencement of the sports day. After that, various competition started, participated by not only our students but also junior college students from other schools. There are totally three groups: the male group, the female group, and the unisex group. The events were all very exciting.

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2007-04-18 00:20:21 補充：
Sorry, 中間錯左少少野以下係更正的... There were totally three groups ...

你有幾個grammatical mistakes, so I help you to correct them.

^_^ The right answer is :
Officially starts before the sport day, certainly cannot be few begins of the ceremony. After the ceremony, each competition regular to start. The schoolmate who has participated except has.........students, also has our school junior college students ( 我們學校的大專生 ), the scene is extremely lively. The competition divides into the male group, the female group, the mixes of male and female group, including: ........

^~^ My answer is certainly correct------professional