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But there are disadvantages of using the ICQ. There are some disadvantages said by the people. They said that it waste time to use it. It will make them concentrate on it all of the time. But according to the result from the interview I feel surpried that no one said that they met bad peopel in ICQ. They don't care this. It may be a problem of using ICQ. So, we suggest people who use ICQ should be careful when they meet new friend in ICQ.

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But there are disadvantages of using the ICQ. There are some disadvantages said by the people. They said it waste time to use it. It will make them play it all the time. But according to the result of the interview I feel surprised that no one says we will meet bad people in ICQ. They don’t care this. It may be a problem of using ICQ. So, we suggest the people who used ICQ should be careful when they meet new friends in ICQ.
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But there are disadvantages when using ICQ. Some people said that playing ICQ is a waste of time. ICQ players might become obssessed with it. But there is something that surprises me with the result of the interview, it is that no one ever said they had met bad people through ICQ. They don't really care about this. But actually this is a serious problem of ICQ. Se we suggest people who used ICQ should be careful when meeting new friends in ICQ.

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But there are disadvantages of using ICQ. Many people said using ICQ is wasting time. It makes them play online all the time. But according to interviews, I feel surprised that no one thinks that we may meet bad people in ICQ. They don’t care about this. It may be a problem of using ICQ. So, we suggest people should be careful when they meet new friends in ICQ.