我今年高三...我will write a 自我介紹ga文章 去一間全英ga大學啊!!!!! 你地可吾可以help下我a

um.. I think English is usually only one of the criteria for admission gei, u know, everyone write an admission essay, the key is to distinguish yourself,
for instance, u can show u have prior knowledge in the subject(depends on what course you'd like to take) and to show the panel that u have potential in becoming a bright student~
also, sincerity is very important, never try to exaggerate the skills, be honest!!
another useful way is to use your characteristicss, like being a Chinese, how you'll behave or do differently from other students~

2007-04-15 13:06:45 補充：
also, use simple English and ask someone to check for you before you send it out

u can do it...add oil