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1.你o個句既意思係我訓得好酣因為我既鄰居好嘈, 前後左矛盾, 應該改為
I couldn't sleep well because my neighbour made too much noise.
2.呢句用字唔準..應該改為
Gary likes to tell silly jokes.
3. 呢句無左個連接詞所以唔得2句痴埋一齊同用字唔岩
The television is broken. Please throw it away.
4. 多左the
I hate mean people.
5. grammar錯
My parents like to praise my classmates.
6.意思唔岩
The weather is hot so we need not wear sweaters.
7. grammar 錯
I don't like to camp at waterfall.
8. 少左個動詞
Don't climb on the ladder beacuse it's very dangerous.或者
It's too dangerous to climb on the ladder.

1. I could not sleep because my neighbours were very noisy.
- 'soundly' means 'deeply and peacefully' (Cambridge online dictionary)
2. Gary likes to tell / telling / cracking silly jokes.
- word collocation: 'Joke' goes with the verb 'tell' or 'crack'
3. The televsion is out of order. Throw it away.
- you can't join two sentences using a 'comma'
4. I hate mean people.
- 'the' is a definite article. Here you only mean 'mean people' in general, so there is no need to use the definite article.
5. My family like to praise / praising my classmates. or My family likes to praise / praising my classmates.
- 'family' can be a singular or plural noun.
6. The weather is hot and you don't need to wear a sweater.
- The subject in the first clause is 'the weather'. If you do not insert another subject in the second clause, the meaning will become 'the weather don't wear a sweater' which is wrong
7. I don't like camping near a /the waterfall.
- It's impossible to camp 'at' the waterfall.
- 'waterfall' is a countable noun and you need to use an article when there is only one. Or you can use 'the' waterfall to mean waterfall in general
8. Dont' climb on the ladder. It's dangerous.
- again, you can't join two sentences with a comma
- the verb is missing in the second clause.