請各位翻譯英文，好緊要，唔該大家幫手！

Price aspect: Leather belt unit price $3! The company requests you
first to give 30% deposit, we only then buy the material to make the
goods! Moreover, we only then sends the goods for 70% total! (Our
freight charge) the money aspect do not have to pay the Dollar!
Inconveniences place, asks respectfully to forgive! If has not
written, please give the deposit us to make the goods, hoped everybody
has the opportunity cooperation!

Pricing: The set price for the leather belt is $3.

We will start the production after 30% of the invoice charges are received as the down payment. This is our company policy. In addition, we will deliver the products after the full payment is received(Extra charges for delivery). All price are quoted in US currency. We apologize for any inconvenience. If there is no further questions, please send in your downpayment in order to start the production. We look forward to your business.

I am just translating your letter and do a little bit of modification, it's because it will be so rude and show your company has to have the 30% in order to be able to buy the material, sounds like your company is broke

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Our company required you to pay 30% charges in advance, in order to buy material for production

Price aspect:The leather belt unit price$3!The company requests you first Bei is 30% deposits, we just buy a material to do goods!Besides, the Bei finishes 70% to amount us to just send goods!(We don't wrap freightage)the money want Bei US$!Inconvenient of, beg your pardon respectfully!If have no, please give deposit we do goods, hope the everyone's organic rendezvous makes!

希望能幫你！

價錢方面：皮帶單價$3！公司要求你們先俾30%訂金，我們才去買物料做貨！另外，俾完70%總數我們才寄貨！(我們不包運費)金錢方面要俾美金！不便之處，敬請原諒！如沒有題，請給訂金我們做貨，希望大家有機會合作！

Price aspect: Leather belt unit price $3! The company requests you to enable first 30% deposit, we only then buy the material to make the goods! Moreover, enables 70% total we only then to send the goods! (Our freight charge) the money aspect do not have to enable the dollar! The discomfort, asks respectfully to forgive! If has not written, please give the deposit us to make the goods, hoped everybody has the opportunity cooperation!

For pricing: unit price of $3 for the leather belt.
We need your payment of 30% on invoice value as deposits agaisnt material purchasing.
Upon 70% of total payment received by us, we shall ship the goods.
Our quoatation is excluding the freight charges and settlement of bill must be in US currency.
We regret for any inconenience caused.
Kindly remit to us your deposits for order processing.
Trust that we can have further business relationship.
以上是一般商業通訊的寫法。希望幫到你！


2007-04-13 10:49:07 補充：
typing mistak and correction (quotation)

2007-04-13 10:49:36 補充：
typing mistake and correction (quotation)

2007-04-13 10:52:12 補充：
下次要成份商業文件詳細列出才可知其他有冇問題！

2007-04-23 17:32:36 補充：
文法及文筆不通，老外看見摸不頭緒！

Regarding the price, it will be $3 each for leather belt. A downpayment of 30% of total price would be needed for the purchase of raw materials. The rest would need to be settled before the finished products to be shipped (shipping cost are not included). The above said price are in US dollars. We apologize for any inconvenience caused. Thank you very much, and we looking forward to corporate with you.

Each belt costs $3 and our company would purchase the materials after the 30% deposit is received. And we would send you the products after the rest 70% is received,(delivery fee not included). We would like a transaction in US dollars. Sorry for the inconvenience caused. Should you have no questions about our service, please feel free to contact us and make an order. We would like to be your career partner.

Price aspect: Leather belt unit price $3! The company requests youfirst 俾 30% deposit, we only then buy the material to make thegoods! Moreover, 俾 70% total we only then send the goods! (Ourfreight charge) the money aspect does not want 俾 the Dollar!Inconveniences place, asks respectfully to forgive! If has notwritten, please give the deposit us to make the goods, hoped everybodyhas the opportunity cooperation

Price respect: Belt unit price $3! Company require you first in order to 30% deposit, we is it buy supplies make the goods to go! In addition, we send the goods in total amount 70% in order to finish! (we do not wrap up the freight charges) Money take in order to U.S. dollar!We apologize for any inconvenience caused! If there is no question, please make the goods to us, hope everybody has an opportunity to cooperate!