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2007-04-13 1:48 am
1.On my face was covered wth dust.
2.Her dad gave her some medicine because she was sick.
3.Your hair is smelly!Wash your hair shampoo.
4.My favorite pet is hamster.
5.I like reading fables and comies.
6.I cross with my older sister because we have an argue.
7.What do lizards eat?

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回答 (4)

2007-04-13 3:34 am
✔ 最佳答案
1) My face was covered with dust.
*No need to put " on ".
Unless:
She had a puzzled expression on her face.
I can tell he is very angry by looking at the expression on his face.

2) correct

3) Your hair is smelly! Wash your hair with shampoo.
* Wash your hair shampoo = wash the shampoo( how you wash your shampoo?)
* There is no need to mention Hair in front of shampoo, just put shampoo is understood, unless you want to say the shampoo is used for washing carpet -"carpet shampoo", for body - "body shampoo" etc.
* wash your hair WITH shampoo = wash your hair using shampoo.

OR
Your hair is smelly! You should wash your hair.
Your hair is smelly! It's better you go to wash your hair.

4) Correct

5) I like reading fables and comics.
* There is no word with the spelling of (comies) .
Perhaps you type it wrongly.

6) I get cross with my elder sister because we have an argument.
*First, there is no "older sister", but "elder sister".
Unless,
My sister is 2 years older than me.

*Second, argue is a verb. If you put "have an...", behind the "an" must be a noun.
Unless,
I get cross with my elder sister because I have argued with her.

*Third, If you want to use with,
should be " get...with"( use adjective between the two words, like "get angry with...")
* cross (adj) - annoyed or angry.
.
Unless
You want to use cross as a verb. No need to put preposition( with) behind the verb.
I cross my elder sister because we have an argument.
I cross my elder sister because I have argued with her.

7) Correct.
Or better use singular noun,
What does lizard eat? ( the verb behind does is simple present tense)


Hope you will understand.
Thank you.
2007-04-13 2:28 am
3.Your hair is smelly!Wash your "WITH" hair shampoo.
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2007-04-13 2:06 am
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你最好就等多D人回答好D
2007-04-13 1:50 am
nothing wrong
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