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The day before I was five, my mum brought me to TOYS“R” US. She asked me if I wanted to buy a toy for my birthday present. ……….skip………..The packing of the toy was so beautiful and attractive, and there were different editions or themes (for me to choose.)


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The day before my five-year old birthday
(five-year old birthday = 五歲生日),
my mother brought me to the Toys"Я"Us
(Toys"Я"Us = 玩具反斗城)
and asked me to choose one of my favourite toys
as my birthday present.....
( favourite = 喜欢的
* One of my favourite toys,
must put "s", because it must be plural-- one of many
* as = 作为，当作）
The packing of the toys are very lovely and attractive.
（* lovely = beautiful )
There are many different versions and themes as well.
(as well = also 也）

The day before my 5th birthday, my mum took me to Toysrus to choose a toy for my birthday present. The toy was packed beautifully and attractively, it had different version and topic, too.

THE DAY BEFORE MY 5 YEARS OLD'S BIRTHDAY, MY MUM GO TO THE TOYS "R"US TOGETHER WITH ME TO CHOOSE A TOY FOR MY BIRTHDAY
.....SKIP.....THE TOYS PACKING WAS BEAUTIFUL AND ATTRACTIVE, THEY
ARE DIFFERENT TO THE OTHER KIND OF TOPICAL SUBJECT.

The day before my five years old, my mother brought me to a toy shop. She told me to choose a toy that i liked most. And that was my birthday present.................skip..........That toy's packing is very beautiful and very attractive, also, it has different theme and version.

When my five years old's birthday previous on, mother leads me to go to the toy counter-small city to be called me to choose a toy equally the birthday gift. .............skip.............The toy's packing was good and it was attraction, also has the dissimilar's edition same subject ..............

The day before my five years old birthday, my mother brought me to Toyrus and asked
me to select a toy as my birthday gift. The package of the toy is very beautiful and attractive. It also has different versions and topics.

Before the day to 5 years old,my mum brought me to toysrus to buy my favourite toy as a birthday present.The packing of the toy was beautiful and interesting and it had different version and topic.