寫作english(15分急)

Children in Hong Kong Is very lucky . A lot of children live in tall building which have lift . Some of them live in village house . Very few people live in big house which have balcony , greenhouse , garage . They can go to school to learn . They are excited about their lives . They have enough food and as warm clothes . They are plesaed with themselfves . They need to go to school every day . They learn the subject at school such as Chinese , English . Saturday and Sunday are their short hoilday . They sometimes does fun things together such as have a barbecue and picnic . They will go shopping too . Shopping is a wonderful experience . It is enjoyable and joyful . Hong Kong is famous for Ocean Park where they play on the roller coaster . The highest mountain on Hong Kong Island is the Peak which have beautiful views . They will go there play too .

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2007-04-10 14:21:45 補充：
SORRY！數錯字數，係149字至“ﾛ岩”！一3一”

In Hong Kong today, parents are still very busy working and they don’t have enough time to spend with their children therefore many of them will have to stay home by themselves most of the time. Children like to sit in front of the computer all days to play online games with their friends or chatting to their friend on the internet. Many children still live in a very apartment in Hong Kong, they don’t have much room to move around and it’s very common for them to share room with their brother or sister.

the above answer is not well organized.
doing it by yourself is the best way for best quality work.

自己的功課自己做。

umm..let me think