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I saw a shark swimming in the centre of the sea and bit a tourist. My father ran towards me and took me out of the beach immediately, and all the tourists and residents ran to the shore, away from the beach. At last, the shark swam away and that tourist was saved. I will never forget this holiday.

1.I damaged it meeting the swim of one shark at the sea center and the swim and biting one tourist. Father carries me running at once at that time, and all tourists and resident come alongside the pier as everything runs, and leave sands. That tourist saved everything as the last shark walked. Inferior march now is my one most unforgettable time.

2.I see a shark swimming in the center of the sea , bites a visitor. Father ran to pull away me immediately at that time, and all visitor and resident run and debark, leave the sandy beach. The shark move finally, those visitor is it answer to rescue. This parade has been me the most unforgettable one.

3.I saw a shark swiming in the middle of the beach, and it bit one of the tourists. My father came and pulled me away immedietly, all tourists and residents escaped to the shore and away from the beach. At last the shark left and that tourist was safed. this trip was the most memorible one I've ever been on.

4.I saw a shark swimming in the centre of the sea and bit a tourist. My father ran towards me and took me out of the beach immediately, and all the tourists and residents ran to the shore, away from the beach. At last, the shark swam away and that tourist was saved. I will never forget this holiday.

5.One day, I saw a shark, which was swimming at the centre of the sea, bit a tourist. My father took me away from the sea immediately, and all swimmers left the beach, too.
At last, the shark swam away and the tourist was saved. This was the most unforgettable tour.

6.Suddenly, I saw a shark swimming in the sea and it even attacked one tourist. As soon as I saw it, my father pulled me to the shore at once. Also, all tourists came up the shore and left the beach. At last, the shark swam away. Luckily, the tourist was saved. This trip was the most unforgettable one.

7.One day,I saw a man was get hurt. And somebody told me that the shark bit that man.
My father heart it , so he quickly pushed me back, and all the other people left the beach . At last , the shark left the beach , and the man had been save .
This time was my most unforgettable experiences.

8.i saw a shark swims in the sea center swims, but also has bitten a tourist.Daddy immediately ran over at that time carries off me, but all tourists and the inhabitants all ran come ashore, leave the sand beach.Finally the shark walked, that tourists all retrieved.This parade is the most unforgettable one time.

9.I see a shark swimming in the center of the sea, bites a visitor. Father ran to pull away me immediately at that time, and all visitor and resident run and debark, leave the sandy beach. The shark move finally, those visitor is it answer to rescue. This parade has been me the most unforgettable one.

One day,I saw a man was get hurt. And somebody told me that the shark bit that man.
My father heart it , so he quickly pushed me back, and all the other people left the beach . At last , the shark left the beach , and the man had been save .
This time was my most unforgettable experiences.

Suddenly, I saw a shark swimming in the sea and it even attacked one tourist. As soon as I saw it, my father pulled me to the shore at once. Also, all tourists came up the shore and left the beach. At last, the shark swam away. Luckily, the tourist was saved. This trip was the most unforgettable one.

其實我反而覺得你可以作多d, e.g.how was the injured tourist?

One day, I saw a shark, which was swimming at the centre of the sea, bit a tourist. My father took me away from the sea immediately, and all swimmers left the beach, too.
At last, the shark swam away and the tourist was saved. This was the most unforgettable tour.

I saw a shark swiming in the middle of the beach, and it bit one of the tourists. My father came and pulled me away immedietly, all tourists and residents escaped to the shore and away from the beach. At last the shark left and that tourist was safed. this trip was the most memorible one I've ever been on.

I see a shark swimming in the center of the sea , bites a visitor. Father ran to pull away me immediately at that time, and all visitor and resident run and debark, leave the sandy beach. The shark move finally, those visitor is it answer to rescue. This parade has been me the most unforgettable one.


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I damaged it meeting the swim of one shark at the sea center and the swim and biting one tourist. Father carries me running at once at that time, and all tourists and resident come alongside the pier as everything runs, and leave sands. That tourist saved everything as the last shark walked. Inferior march now is my one most unforgettable time.