作英文詩問題

Here comes my little article (作品) in eight lines with rhymes (韻腳):

【 I LOVE SUMMER 】

I earnestly (衷心) love Summer!

Life is alike ginger (薑/也解作活力刺激).

Surfing (衝浪) is so cool for youngster (年輕人).

Girls with mini skirt (迷你裙) & bikini (比堅尼) wear.

How dynamic and energetic (活力的). Really they are!

The season is charming & sexy with a sweet temper (性情).

My spirit is high while my heart is heating up with cracker (鞭炮).

Traces (痕跡) of prosperity (興盛) & blossoming (興盛/開花) everywhere.

Summer is the best,
let me have a rest.
Just look at the sky,
the sun is so high!
Come to the beautiful beach,
There's not too much fly.
I drop my ice cream,
and i have to scream!

Summer, summer
I love summer
summer is the best
when I go to the beach
when I am having ice cream
I feel the water is nice and cool
I feel the ice cream is gonna melt in my mouth
oh, summer, hey, summer
I am going to play with you