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多吃肉　短暫脫水

另外，若未能降低整體的卡路里吸收，多吃肉只會做成身體短暫脫水，體重快速下降、隨後又快速回升的減肥假象。同時，少吃五穀類亦會引致纖維素不足以及長期便秘﹔而多吃紅肉更會增加患上腸道癌症的機會。因此不論「食肉減肥法」有多神奇，我們亦要考慮其對身體的負面影響，以免因少失大。

英文:

Eat meat more brief dehydration

Besides, if can not reduce whole calories absorption, eating meat more only will make into brief dehydration of body, the weight descends quickly and backs up quickly again later on of reduce weight appearance.In the meantime, eating grain less will also lead with the result that the cellulose isn't enough and be constipated over a long period of time;And eats thechance that the red meat woulds even increase to suffer from the bowel way cancer more.Therefore in spite of"carnivorous reduce weight a method" have much miraculous, we also want to consider it to body of negative influence, in order to prevent because of few lose greatly.

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多吃肉　短暫脫水

另外，若未能降低整體的卡路里吸收，多吃肉只會做成身體短暫脫水，體重快速下降、隨後又快速回升的減肥假象。同時，少吃五穀類亦會引致纖維素不足以及長期便秘﹔而多吃紅肉更會增加患上腸道癌症的機會。因此不論「食肉減肥法」有多神奇，我們亦要考慮其對身體的負面影響，以免因少失大。

(translated version):
Eating more meat Temporary dehydration

Besides, if there is no effective reduction on the overall calories absorption, eating more meat will only cause temporary dehydration of the body, which induces an illusion of a quick weight loss followed with a rapid rebound on weight gain. Meanwhile, the inadequate intake of cereals will cause a lack of dietary fibre and hence long-term constipation. In addition, the increased intake of red meat will enchance the chance of having intestinal cancer. Thus, however miraculous (the result of)* Atkins Diet is, we should consider its negative impacts on our health lest we might lose the more worthwhile one for the less.


*括住即可寫可唔寫.
p.s.
attached websites for more details of 「食肉減肥法」,
I hope it would be of use to you~
1.http://hk.lifestyle.yahoo.com/070323/63/248bj.html
2.http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Atkins_Nutritional_Approach

2007-04-08 20:09:09 補充：
(((not copy from the others and plz make no copy!!!)))remarks:1.for the title,"Eating more meat Temporary dehydration" :it's not a sentence at all, there should be some spacing in between "meat" and "Temporary" just like the one in your chinese version.

2007-04-08 20:10:03 補充：
becoz I've tried to keep all your original writing.2.typing mistake of "it " in P.S. should be "they"

第一, 個人意見, 你的標題很像與內容不吻合, 改做食肉減肥法真相等等會否更貼題?

舊標題: Meat-only diet - Temporary dehydration
建議: Ugly truth of meat-only diet

Besides, if there has no effective reduction on the total amount of calories taken, meat-only diet will cause temporary dehydration inducing a false but quick weight reduction. The reduction will be quickly recovered once normal diet is resumed. Besides, the insufficient intake of cereals (和蔬果? and vegetables) will cause a serious lack of dietary fiber hence long-term constipation. In addition, the excess intake of red meats will increase the chance of intestional cancer. Therefore, no matter how brilliant the result of meat-only diet is, we should consider its negative impacts on our health.

Eats the meat short dehydration
Moreover, if has not been able to reduce the whole a calorieabsorption, eats the meat only to be able to make the bodily shortdehydration, the body weight fast drop, afterwards fast rises againloses weight the pseudomorph. At the same time, little eats fivecereals also to be able to bring about the cellulose to beinsufficient as well as the long-term constipation ﹔ But eats thered meat to be able to increase suffers from the intestinal tractcancer the opportunity. Therefore no matter "the food meat losesweight the law" to have mysteriously, we also must consider it to thebodily negative influence, in order to avoid because little loses in abig way.

Eats the meat short dehydration

Moreover, if has not been able to reduce the whole a calorie absorption, will eat the meat to make the bodily short dehydration only, the body weight fast drop, is also afterward fast rises again loses weight the false appearance. At the same time, will little eat five cereals also to bring about the cellulose insufficiency as well as the long-term constipation ﹔, but will eat the red meat to increase suffers from the intestinal tract cancer's opportunity. Therefore no matter “the zoo*****ous loses weight the law” to have mysteriously, we must consider it to body's negative influence, because in order to avoid little loses in a big way.