please correct it

原文
Dear all,

I am sorry to note you that i cannot book the Garden restuarant in last day, so today we will have a lunch in Nice restaurant at 13:00. our booking no is 16.

wish you all have a nice holiday!

Cheers
yuki

改正後

Dear all,

I am sorry to note you that I cannot book the Garden restaurant in last day, so today we will have a lunch in Nice restaurant at 13:00. Our booking no is 16.

Wish you all have a nice holiday!

Cheers
yuki

You should look at (homaingo2005)'s and (noely36hk)'s, these two are better.

Dear all ( I may use Ladies and gentlemen)

I am informing everyone that we are going to have lunch in the Nice Restaurant at one o'clock today. Our booking number is 16. I would also like to apologize for not able to get the reservation yesterday at the Garden Restaurant.

Wish you all a nice holiday,

Cheers

Yuki

Dear all,

As no reservation was made at Garden Restaurant yesterday, please be informed that we will have our lunch together at Nice Restaurant at 1:00 pm today. The booking number is 16.

Cheers

Yuki

Dear all,

I am sorry to inform you that Garden restaurant was full booking yesterday. Hence, as an alternative, we will have our lunch in Nice restaurant at 13:00 today while our booking number is 16.

2007-04-04 13:53:07 補充：
Have a nice holiday!Cheers,Yuki

have lunch in a nice restaurant, 我見好多人改係have lunch in the nice restaurant, 你都無講邊間, 一開始要用a,

wish you all have a holiday 就唔得la, wish 之後係唔跟verb 架, 用左verb 就係反意思, 不過係用past tense. 你唔會見到wish u all have a merry christmas, 只有wish u all a merry christmas,

所以應該係 wish you all a nice holiday

Dear All:

I am sorry to inform you that I am able to make a reservation at the Garden Resturant
yesterday. Therefore, we will have lunch at teh Nice Restaurant at 13:00. Our reservation
number is number 16.

Wish you all have a nice holiday

Cheers
Yuki

Dear all,
I am sorry to inform you that I could not book (make a reservation) at the Garden Restaurant yesterday. Therefore today we will have lunch in the Nice Restaurant at 13:00. The booking is in (somebody's name. company's name etc), table for 16.

Wish you (all) have a nice holiday!

Cheers!
Yuki

Dear all,

I am sorry to inform you that I was unable to make a reservation at the Garden Restaurant. Thus, we will have lunch at Nice Restaurant at 13:00 instead. Our reservation reference number is 16.

I wish you all a nice holiday!

Cheers,
Yuki

Dear all,

I am sorry to inform you all that the reservation of Garden restuarant is unsuccessfullly yesterday. Therefore, we will have a lunch in Nice restaurant today at 13:00. Our booking no is 16.

Have a nice day!

Cheers
yuki