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One day her wife discovered a drug. She thought it was from the sky. If she ate the drug, she might be more beautiful. Therefore, she decided to eat it. When she ate it, her feet left the ground. She was going to the moon. Although she was afraid, she could not stop. She could never go back home. She would stay in the moon. However, she was not lonely because she had some friends there.

One day , (man's name)'s wife discovered a drug . His wife tought it was from the sky. if she eat the drug ,she will be might more beautiful , so she decided eat it.Suddenly,her feet left the ground and she was flying to the moon ,so she was afraid of she could not stop and never comeback to her home .She would stay there but she had not lonely because she had some friends in the noon .

One day her wife discovered a drug .she think it is from the sky. If eat the drug. Maybe more beautiful she decided eat it when she ate it. Her foots leave the ground
And she is going to the moon although she is afraid she is cannot stop she never comeback your home she will state in the noon but she have not lonely because she had some friends in the noon.

One day her wife discovered a drug .She think it is from the sky.If eat the drug. Maybe more beautiful she decided eat it when she ate it. Her foots leave the ground
And she is going to the moon although she is afraid she is cannot stop she never comeback your home she will state in the noon but she have not lonely because she had some friends in the noon .