Long Long ago in a village, A man called MR HAU, he is a strong man .because he can shoot down sun of eight, he always excise shooting and drink .he is very busy .
He have not time for family, her wife always felt lonely she told that to him but he still shoot and drink
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2007-04-03 4:07 am
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2007-04-03 4:27 am
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其中一個淨係改grammar ge改法：A long time ago in a village, there was a man called Mr HAU who was a strong man. Since he could shoot down eight suns, he always exercised shooting and drank. He was very busy.
He had no time for family so her wife always felt lonely. She told him but he still shot and drank.
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2007-04-03 5:33 pm
A long time ago in a village, there was a a strong man called Mr Hau . Since he could shoot down suns of eight, he always exercised shooting and drank. He was very busy.He had no time for family ,so her wife always felt lonely,she told him but he still shot and drank.
2007-04-03 09:35:25 補充：
A long time ago in a village, there was a a strong man called Mr Hau . Because he could shoot down suns of eight, he always exercised shooting and drank. He was very busy.He had no time for family ,so her wife always felt lonely,she told him but he still shot and drank.
2007-04-03 09:44:20 補充：
A long time前need to 格2個格
2007-04-03 09:35:25 補充：
A long time ago in a village, there was a a strong man called Mr Hau . Because he could shoot down suns of eight, he always exercised shooting and drank. He was very busy.He had no time for family ,so her wife always felt lonely,she told him but he still shot and drank.
2007-04-03 09:44:20 補充：
A long time前need to 格2個格
2007-04-03 4:13 am
u can use past tense
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