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我估你係想話:

服務態度惡劣:
要改善員工服務態度便要on-the-job training. 這個方法不單成本低, 並且可以乘機改善經理同員工之間的關係

員工的反感
建立賞罰制度, 是一個低成本去令員工士氣增加的方法

Poor customer service
In order to improve customer service, we suggest offering on-the-job trainings. It is not only economical, but also effective in improving the relationship between the manager and the staff.

Negative attitude of the staff
Building up a carrot-and-stick system is an economical method to boost employee morale.

Carrot and stick 係賞罰制度的成語
http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Carrot_and_stick

Recommendations:

1)For the poor service attitude
I suggest to improve the poor services attitude through training course.This solution can improve the service by lowering the cost and it can develop a good relationship between the staff and manager.

2)Negative ness of staff
I recommend to establish a reward system which can punish the staff with bad attitude.It can build up a high spirit among the staff. Besides, it can lower the cost too.

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Recommendations
The poor service attitude
It has been suggested that the poor service attitude can be improved by job training. This solution can improve the services at a lower cost as well as make a good relationship between staff and manager.

Negative attitude of staff
Building up a rewards system can punish those with bad working attitude. It can build up a high-morale in the restaurant as well. In addition, the cost is lower.

應該冇錯grammer. Good!!!