快！升中問題！

Good morning everyone,I am Wong Pui Kwan from Good counsel catholic primary school, today i would like to introduce myself,I like SWIMMING ,READING BOOK,PLAY BASKETBALL and PIANTING at leisure time,and i study in maths,nice to meet you.

2007-03-31 11:40:36 補充：
if you want to have a better one,you can tell me more information

2007-03-31 13:11:20 補充：
i study in st.paul co- ed ,my grammar is well-trained

2007-03-31 13:18:06 補充：
Good morning everyone,I am Wong Pui Kwan from Good counsel catholic primary school, I like SWIMMING ,READING BOOK,PLAY BASKETBALL and PIANTING at leisure time,because (the reason why you like your hobby) ,my favourite subject is MATHS and I hope I can have some great memories in this college

2007-03-31 13:21:11 補充：
……I hope I can have some great memories in this college,thank you.

2007-03-31 13:27:01 補充：
and I hope I can have some jovial and impressive memories in this college

2007-03-31 13:38:14 補充：
你是不是一個囗才很好的人?如果是,我可幫你加或sarcastic,ironic等字眼

2007-03-31 13:40:06 補充：
你的人際關係好不好?如果是,我可幫你加diplotmatic等字眼

2007-03-31 13:50:10 補充：
如果你用她那一篇,'mathematics and I am very good at it'改成'mathematics and I am really good at it'會較佳,I really hope to study in this excellent secondary / senior school,不要用senior,因為senior是高中

2007-03-31 13:50:25 補充：
I have a lot of friends and I get along well with others改成I have a lot of friends and I get along well with others because of my diplotmatic skills

唔好叫人作比你要參x

Good morning / afternoon, my name is Wong Pui Kwan and I am twelve / thirteen years old. I am currently studying in Good Counsel Catholic Primary School in primary six. My favourite subject is mathematics and I am very good at it. As for my hobbies, I like to swim, read, play basketball and painting. I have a lot of friends and I get along well with others. I really hope to study in this excellent secondary / senior school. Thank you.