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Today is my school's Sports Day.
In the morning qaurter past eight. We take a coach to the Sha Tin Sport Center. It is near my school. So we get there fastly. When I get into the center. I think there is so big. There is a football court in the center. Also, there are so many seats for people. I get to my seat and take off my clothes. Because it is so hot there. I am the 1st runner up.

今天是學校的陸運會。
Today is my school's sports day.
早上八時十五分，我們就乘車出發到沙田運動場，那裹離學校很近，很快就到達。
We got to the Sha Tin Sports Ground by bus in qaurter past eight early in the morning .We arrived very soon because it was close to my school.
我一走進運動場，發覺那裏十分大，運動場中間有一個足球場，座位也較多。
When i got into the sports ground,i found that the sport ground was very big.There was a football court in the middle.There were also many seats.
我一走到我的座位，就立刻脫衣服，因為那裹真的很熱。我還拿很一個銀獎。
When i came to my seat,i take off the cloth immediately,because i felt very hot.I also got a silver metal in the competition.

Today is our school athletics day.
At 8:15am we went to Sha Tin Sports Ground by car. It was quite near school, so we got there in a short time. I went in and there was a big place. There was a football field in the middle and there were many seats. I went to my seat and I got changed because it was really hot. I got a silver medal that day.

it is my school sports day today.
we went by coach to sha tin sport centre at 08:15 this morning. as it is in close proximity we arrive there in a short space of time.
when i enter the stadium, i found that it is enormously big. it contains a football pitch and have vast amount of spectator seats.
the weather was a extemely hot at the time, when i got to my seat, i had to remove some of outer garment.
i finished with a silver medal in this eventful day.

2007-03-30 21:41:33 補充：
如果你照我的寫法, 一定知你作幣, 因為呢種寫法, 係英國正宗文法, 但一定掂!

Today is the school land transportation meeting. Early morning eight o'clock 15 minute, we ride in a carriage send tothe Shatin athletic field, that binds to the school is very near, veryquickly arrives. I as soon as enter the athletic field, detected that □extremely big,among the athletic field has a soccer field, the seat are also more. Ias soon as walk to mine seat, immediately escapes clothes, becausethat binds very is really hot. I also take very a silver prize.

Today is my school's Sports Day.

ln the morning about quarter past eight, we take a coach to the Sha Tin Sports Centre. lt's very closed to my school so l arrived here very quickly. When l went into the Centre, l discovered that there was so big and in the center of the centre, there is a football pitch with a lot of seats. l went to my seat and took off my coat immediately as there was really hot. l scored a silver metal in the competition.