幫我改文+評語緊急!!!!20分

用戶96386

2007-03-30 2:07 am

we have five foreign fifth form students visiting us for a week. Can you please make suggestion about things for them to do over the friday evening and weekend
these activities should:
be fun for teenagers
teach them or show them something about Hong Kong
Not cost too much!
write about 100 words

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Friday evening On friday everning,In my opinion,we have organize party.In the party,l world like to talk about with classmates.in the party,syudents can share experience.If you unhappy,people can help you,that is a good idea.

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Saturday On saturday,In my opinion,we have organize hiking team.when lhiking in the saturday,teenagers can help other students.When people feel very tired,teenagers can give some water.l hope to people friends become a good friends.This is a good idea.

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sunday On sunday,In my opinion,we have organize travel in wet-park,In the park,In the park,We can understand environment and relax your body.because wet-park is a good place.we can see special birds.l believe that the activity be fun for teenagers.

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因為字數限制 sorry

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我係中5 考試局 mock paper 1b

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冇咁誇張!!!讀大學

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由這篇短文睇到我的英文底好唔好

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希望大家比個分數, 包括grammar同內容分各總分為5分

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用戶17024

2007-03-30 2:59 am

✔ 最佳答案

Friday evening
In my opinion, we should organize a party. Students can share they experiences in the party. If you are unhappy, you can share your feelings with the students as well. I think this is a suitable activity.
(我認為"In the party,l world like to talk about with classmates."依句有冇都得^^)

Saturday
In my opinion, we should organize a hiking team and go hiking on Saturdays. When students felt tire, they can help each other by giving others water. Through this activity, I hope that students can become good friends. I think this is also a suitable idea.

Sunday
In my opinion, we should organize an outing to the wet-park on Sunday. We can learn more about the environment and relax ourselves in the park. It is also an educational plae. We can see different types of birds and other animals. I think this is a suitable idea as well.

希望可以幫到你^.^

2007-03-29 19:01:02 補充：
Saturday: felt *tired

2007-03-29 19:01:57 補充：
Sunday: educational *place

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幫我改文+評語 緊急!!!!20分

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幫我改文+評語緊急!!!!20分