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'even dies' 句子和涵義都不夠完整, 你可看看以下的修改建議;

1. The person has a high risk of getting coronary heart disease and may even die from this....

2. This person has a high risk of dying from coronary heart disease....

我認為
The person will be in a higher risk of getting coronary heart diseases which may always kill.
會好啲!

用 "even kills" 我會覺得好D

"人有得到冠狀心臟病高風險甚至死"

even dying.

This is to match the noun clause "getting coronary heart disease".