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2007-03-29 3:50 am
The person has a high risk of getting coronary heart disease or even dies

even dies 有冇問題??

回答 (5)

2007-03-29 10:39 am
✔ 最佳答案
'even dies' 句子和涵義都不夠完整, 你可看看以下的修改建議;

1. The person has a high risk of getting coronary heart disease and may even die from this....

2. This person has a high risk of dying from coronary heart disease....
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2007-03-29 4:11 am
我認為
The person will be in a higher risk of getting coronary heart diseases which may always kill.
會好啲!
2007-03-29 3:57 am
用 "even kills" 我會覺得好D
2007-03-29 3:55 am
"人有得到冠狀心臟病高風險甚至死"
2007-03-29 3:53 am
even dying.

This is to match the noun clause "getting coronary heart disease".


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