a grammar question

[[ I find it hard to trust not only me, but everyone around me because of you. ]]
解: (因為你) 我覺得好難相信自己 及身邊的人.
i.e. 你搞到我而家好難相信自己及身邊既人. (責備緊人).
There is no flaw in the grammar. 那是當然的因為歌詞經好多人讀&改.
歌詞有fragment更大的可能係故意的. (e.g. rap)

[[ I found out that it's hard to trust not only me, but everyone around me because of you. ]]
解: (因為你) 我發現我係好難相信自己 及身邊的人.
Grammatically說, 冇錯 但整個意思變成 (感謝你令我覺悟).
呢一句唔順口,仲加長左個verse. 尤其係歌詞要用最短最流暢的寫作方式.
一句歌詞太長好難夾旋律.

[[ Found out ]] 只會講, 同用在 informal writing. 中學或以上都好小用.
歌詞幾乎唔會用, 因為一首正常既歌唔會有咁既scenario.
幾乎一定會有比 found out 更適合的詞語.

e.g.
I FOUND OUT there was a hidden camera in her living room.
I wish I never FOUND OUT the truth.

can be replaced with the following, respectively.

I discovered a hidden camera in her living room.
I wish I never got to know the truth.

2007-03-27 09:24:22 補充：
BY THE WAY, 我岩岩睇左個歌詞. 應該係講緊佢媽咪, 信錯左人, 抑鬱左好耐, 應該係自殺或俾車撞死. 個女因為trauma而長大得不正常. 怪媽咪自私; 丟低佢.佢覺得冇感受過愛. 所以性格比較偏激, 孤癖.你指那一段verse的意思係:因為你,我唔敢太相信自己 或身邊的人.(i.e. 係童年陰影令到而家冇辦法信到人, 好孤獨, 怕做錯決定, 信錯人, esp 男人.)

樓主第一句括號內的內容語意嚴重不通，小弟看不明白它究竟想表達甚麼。所以我猜測它大概的意思是﹕“因為你，不只我覺得難以明白，連我身邊的人亦有同樣的感覺”。這句即使翻譯成中文，它的語意仍支離破碎，小弟在此將它勉強翻譯成﹕
Not only me, include everyone around me, find that is hard to trust because of you.
在此句中，"that"是指那件你和身邊的人無法相信的事，句尾是解釋該件事不能相信的原因，亦是此句最大問題的地方。因為句中被指責的“你”，作為一個人本身不能成為事件不能被相信的理由。只有句中的“你”的一些其他東西，例如說話或行動才能令樓主不能相信那事件，所以樓主應提供更多資料去令該句的語意更完整。