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2007-03-27 9:14 am

La rivière de notre enfance - Michel Sardou and Garou ( 法國歌手)
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=hmJo41GZURY

在英翻譯中有某錯誤？
I remember of a tree,
I remember wind,
Of these rumors of waves,
To The end of the ocean.
I remember of a city,
I remember of a voice,
Of these Christmases that shine,
In the snow and the cold one.

更新1:

I remember of a dream, I remember of a king, OF A summer that finishes itself, OF A wood house, I remember sky, I remember water, OF A dress in lace, Torn in the back,

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This is not blood that flows in our veins, THIS IS the river of our childhood, This is not his death that is done me penalty, THIS IS of not more to see my father that dances!

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I remember of a headlight, I remember of a sign, OF A light in evenings, OF AN anonymous room, I remember love, I remember gestures,The hackney cab of the return, The perfume on my jacket.

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I remember so late, I remember if little, Of these chance trains, OF A couple of lovers, I remember London, I remember Rome, sun that does the shadow, sorrow that does the man.

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This is not blood that flows in our veins, THIS IS the river of our childhood, This is not his death that is done me penalty, THIS IS of not more to see my father that dances!

回答 (1)

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2007-03-29 10:32 pm

✔ 最佳答案

我試試根據你的版本改，只重 GRAMMAR, 另參考了法文歌詞原文。

I remember () a tree,
I remember the wind,
Of these rumors of waves,
On the verge of the ocean.
I remember () a city,
I remember () a voice,
Of these Christmases that shine,
In the snow and the cold (). I remember () a dream,
I remember () a king,
Of a summer that is fulfilled,
Of a wooden house,
I remember the sky,
I remember the water,
Of a dress in lace,
Torn on the back,
It is not blood that flows in our veins,
It is the river of our childhood,
It is not his death that gives me pain,
It is no longer seeing my father dance!
I remember () a headlight, I remember () a sign, () a light in the evenings,
() an anonymous room,
I remember love, I remember gestures, the hackney () of () return,
The perfume on my jacket.
I remember so late, I remember so little, () these trains of chance,
() A couple of lovers,
I remember London, I remember Rome, the sun that makes the shadow,
sorrow that makes the man.
It is not blood that flows in our veins,
It is the river of our childhood,
It is not his death that has done me penalty,
It is no longer seeing my father dance!

2007-03-29 21:05:03 補充：
尾二那句改漏了：＞＞It is not his death that has done me penalty, 應是：It is not his death that gives me pain,

2007-03-30 11:17:42 補充：
看漏眼，D OF 通通都不要，REMEMBER 是不用加 OF 的。

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