英文口試：請替我作一篇稿詞關於到長洲旅行！(20分)

這次的長洲之旅我感到很開心和難忘.
我們去長洲那天.
所以我一直都很期待那天.
雖然那天天氣不太好.還不時下起雨.
但仍無損我們的興致.
我們一早便在火車站出發.
搭了火車.小輪和新渡輪才到達長洲.
真是非常艱辛啊!
長洲不但風景美麗.而且還有很多有名的旅遊勝地.
所以是我們這次專題要介紹的香港旅遊名勝.
我們到處參觀.拍照.離開前還買了手信才回去.
這次旅程值得一提的是.
我們一行5人都到過了張寶仔洞.
這次是我第2次進張寶仔洞了.
裏面的確很黑.
不過.我們都覺得既興奮又驚險.
希望下次有機會可以再去一次.

This Cheung Chau of travel me to feel very happy and difficult to forget. {This Cheung Chau of travel me and feel very happy and difficult and forget. / This Cheung Chau of travel me to feel very happy with difficult forget.}
We go to Cheung Chau that day. {We go Cheung Chau that day.}
So I have been all expecting that day very much.
Although that annoys every day not so good.Still rain often.
But still have no Sun our fascination. {But still without Sun our fascination.}
We set out in the train station then early in the morning.
Took a train.The small round arrives long continent with new ferry just. {Small round with lately the ferry just arrives long continent. / Small round and new the ferry just arrives long continent.}
Is really a hardships very!
The Cheung Chau isn't only a scenery beauty. {Cheung Chau not only a scenery beauty.} And there are also a lot of well-known tour divine spots.
So is Hong Kong that our this special subject wants to introduce to travel famous spot. {So is Hong Kong that our this special subject wants to introduce and travel famous spot. / So is our this special subject to want introductive Hong Kong to travel famous spot.}
We visit everywhere.Take photo.Still bought the hand letter to just return before leaving. {Still bought to believe to just return before leaving.}
The itinerary is well worth mentioning this time BE.
We a went 5 people to all go to a piece treasure Zi hole. {We a go 5 people all to led a piece treasure Zi hole.}
This is my 2nd times to enter a treasure Zi holes. {Is my 2nd time to enter a treasure Zi hole this time.}
The inside is really very black.
However.We all feel excited and breathtaking.
Hope to be next time to there is chance to go one more. {Hope to be next time and there is chance to and go one more.}

There is no rickshaw (人力車) in Cheung Chau. Here is some of the attractions of Cheung Chau:

Bun Festival (太平清醮)
street procession with custumed children (飄式遊行)
Climbing of bub tower (搶包山)
Tin Hau temple (天后廟)
Providing tourists a pleasant place to escape from the hustle and bustle of city-life.
Adventure to the Cheung Po Tsai pirate cave
Enjoying seafood in the fishing village

http://www.edunetconnect.com/categories/originals/chinafest/chinesef.html
http://www.hkoutdoors.com/forums/activities/cheung-chau-seafood-festival-oct-2006.html
http://www.hkoutdoors.com/outlying-islands/cheung-chau.html
the above 3 links can help you to write that essay, they have all the information
you need, like rickshaw, seafood festival in cheung chau ...
good luck la
:)