幫忙翻譯成英文,謝謝(10分)

打機本來是一種令自己舒適的方法,
playing video game used to be a method to relax,
但是過份沉迷就會變成傷害自己,
however, it harm yourself if you go to much into it,
事實上,打機有很多壞處,
Actually, playing video game have many disadvantage
首先,會影響學習和浪費大量時間,
Firstly, it affect study and is a waste of time,
之前看很多新聞都報導有人因打機而死亡,
many death because of playing video game were presented on news
我覺得很可怕,打機的吸引力真的那麼大嗎?
i feel so scarey, is playing video game that attactive?

曾經,我也是一個沉迷打機的人,
i used to be a person that spent lot of time on video game
我跟我的朋友們經常都會一起在網路上打機,
me and my friend always play online game together,
每天晚上都打到很晚,
we play untill late night
到了上課時便睡覺,
and sleep in class,
現實中的成績就一直後退,
Therefore, result in a decrease of achievement,
更因為打機而留班,and even "degraded" because of it,
最後在我離開學校的時候,
at last, when we leave school,
老師還安慰我,令我十分後悔,
i felt regretful when my teacher comfort me,
於是我便下定決心放棄打機,很慶幸我做到了.
so i decided to quit playing game, i am glad that i have done it!


HOPE THIS HELP!!

Originally playing computer is a way to make them comfortable, but it will become too obsessed with his own injury, in fact, There have been many disadvantages to fight, first of all, affect learning and wasted a lot of time. watch a lot of news reports before the plane was due to die fighting, I think it is terrible, The fight really big attraction? once, I am also a person obsessed with playing computer. I told some of my friends often join in the fighting machine on the Internet, are hitting late every night, they sleep in the classroom. The real achievement has been paid, but because of the class fighting machine, the last time I left the school, the teachers comforted me, I very much regret it, so I determined to give up playing computer, I am glad to do that.

Video gaming is suppose to be relaxing. However, it will be terrible if someone is addict to it. Actually, video gaming do have its negative side.
This activity is not only time consuming, but it does affect our ability to concentrate on study. In the past, there was also some reporting over the death caused by video gaming. I find that this is scary, is video gaming really that irresistable?

Once upon a time, I was totally addicted to the game. Every night, I used to play internet games with a bunch of friends till really late. During the day, I did fall in asleep in the classes. Not only did my grades going down hill, but I had to repeat the semester all over again. That day, when I walked out of the school, one of my teacher comforted me and I felt horrible.

Finally, I came to my senses and gave up video game. Fortunately, I did it.

打機本來是一種令自己舒適的方法,但是過份沉迷就會變成傷害自己,事實上,打機有很多壞處,首先,會影響學習和浪費大量時間,之前看很多新聞都報導有人因打機而死亡,我覺得很可怕,打機的吸引力真的那麼大嗎?
Playing video games helps you relax, but playing too much can be a problem. (建議刪去首先: 你都冇其他害處列出...) It can affect your studies and eat up a lot of time. There have even been cases of deaths due over-exertion on video games. I felt terrible (覺得害怕定係打機可怕？請參閱下面) and wondered, is video game was really such a big attraction?
[你下一段已說明其實打機真的很有魔力，咁你呢個問題其實係多餘，建議修改／刪除]

曾經,我也是一個沉迷打機的人,我跟我的朋友們經常都會一起在網路上打機,每天晚上都打到很晚,到了上課時便睡覺,現實中的成績就一直後退,更因為打機而留班,最後在我離開學校的時候,老師還安慰我,令我十分後悔,於是我便下定決心放棄打機,很慶幸我做到了.

I used to spend a lot of time on video games. Every night my friends and I sat in front of our computers playing online games until the eary hours. Naturally I could not help falling asleep in class. My academic results faltered, and the fun at night cost my promotion. （離開學校係被踢走定放學呀？我當係收左成績表放學先）Even so, my teacher consoled and encouraged me as I left school with my report card. Full of regret, I decided to quit playing video games, and I am glad I have succeeded.

打機本來是一種令自己舒適的方法,
Originally, playing computer games is a kind of method to make oneself comfortable.
但是過份沉迷就會變成傷害自己,
But indulgence in it will hurt oneself.
事實上,打機有很多壞處,首先,會影響學習和浪費大量時間,
In fact, there are many disadvantages in playing computer games. It wastes plenty of time and affects studying.
之前看很多新聞都報導有人因打機而死亡,我覺得很可怕,
I feel horrified, as I have heard much news report that some people died of playing computer games before.
打機的吸引力真的那麼大嗎?
Is playing computer games such attractive ?
曾經,我也是一個沉迷打機的人,我跟我的朋友們經常都會一起在網路上打機,
I am a person who have indulged in playing computer games. My friends and I often played on-line computer games.
每天晚上都打到很晚,到了上課時便睡覺,
I played very late every night, and slept during the lessons.
現實中的成績就一直後退,更因為打機而留班,
My academic results were actually deteriorating and I had to repeat my school year because of playing computer games.
最後在我離開學校的時候,老師還安慰我,令我十分後悔,
Finally teacher still comforted me when I quitted school, which made me regretful.
於是我便下定決心放棄打機,很慶幸我做到了.
Therefore I decided to give up playing that. I was happy that I succeeded.

2007-03-26 19:59:06 補充：
I am a person who have indulged in .......‘have’錯了，應該用‘has’