Please..幫我改短呢幾段句子..20分!!!緊急 "

The package might include a move from piece rates to profit sharing and share-ownership and other ways such as performance-based remuneration.


Education referS to the knowledge or skill obtained or developed by a learning process.

It is a program that gives learners an instructive or enlightening experience.

我覺得真係好有商業色彩：空泛，第二句係咪一定要講？第三句睇完都唔知想講乜，部份自作主將刪了。

The original sentence is too clumsy(笨拙).Let me put rephrase it as follows:

1)The remuneration package should be changed from standard wage (piece rate??) to profit sharing such that individual performance can be factored in.

2) Education is a process of how knowledge and skills are being learnt.

3) (I don't really get what you want to say in the third sentence. Just a wild guess!!)
It is a methodology which is instructive and enlightening to measure the academic attainment.