autumn poem!!!!!!幫幫手----------^^"

AutumnX
It’s nice to see you; don’t you know
Your chilly brightness makes me smile?
You paint my world, you make it glow;
It’s good that you can stay awhile.
You bring the apples, fresh and real,
And pumpkins dress each roadside stand.
The tastes, the smells, the sights, the feel -
You spread excitement through the land.
You whisper to the fading light,
Or howl and toss the leaves around.
You sometimes brush the landscape white
And greet the day without a sound.
You hold my hand, and then we’ll part,
But I’m prepared for winter’s cold.
You’ve left your spirit in my heart;
I’ve learned the lessons that you’ve told.
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Treat AUTUMN as a HUMAN, a FRIEND or an EX-BF ... or GF ...
it is personification ... and you need emotion in the whole poem ...
and you need to PICTURE those SCENES in your mind and imagine you are
facing that beautiful scene in front of you, and how magnificant they are ...
then say it out with a sharp and focus voice with a lot of spirit ... and when it comes to the COLD and white ... you need to bring sorrow to the tone ...
Hope all help, very nice poem indeed :)