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Mark has been to Japan. He has also been to Australia. He has also been to Brazil.
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2007-03-23 7:00 pm
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2007-03-23 7:55 pm
✔ 最佳答案
Mark has been to Japan. He has also been to Australia. He has also been to Brazil三句句子結構一樣時，可以將其結合，例如：
Mark has been to Japan, Australia and Brazil.
如果，你想有ｄ變化，可以係：
Mark has been to Japan, Australia as well as Brazil. Or
Mark has not only been to Japan, but also Australia and Brazil.
睇你鍾意簡單直接，定係有ｄ層次。
參考: 自己
2007-03-23 7:34 pm
結構無問題, 但好長. 建議改為 Mark has been to Japan, Australia and Brazil. 會好好多.
2007-03-23 7:17 pm
長左d,你成句d意思都係一樣.可以縮短為
Mark has been to Japan, Australia and Brazil.
Mark has been to Japan, Australia and Brazil.
2007-03-23 7:04 pm
文法無錯, 但太冗長. 應寫為
Mark has been to Japan, Australia and Brazil.
Mark has been to Japan, Australia and Brazil.
參考: myself.
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