英文翻譯，如何較佳？
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情感描寫和動作和神情多一些。
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Susan低下頭，看住會考成績表。盛怒下，她用力弄曲了成績單。心中想：不會丫﹗不會丫﹗我不會係這個成績。晚晚的苦讀都係咁……
她的動作引起了其他同學的注意。她的好友mary拍拍她的摶頭，關心地問她： SUSAN没有回應她，只是沉思在成績單上
MARY再關心地問：
這時，SUSAN站了起來，一個人跑出班房。她一直沿住樓梯，跑出校園。
Susan走到一個足球場附近的涼亭坐下。心中有千萬個想法。她不明白為何這個成績，比她想像中差百倍﹗她的醫生夢想可以實現嗎？
“boom”一聲。Susan大叫一聲：矣也!! 一個足球打中了susan的頭。Susan用手摸摸自己的頭，好痛丫﹗誰欠打丫？竟然一個足球飛埋來。
一個瘦骨嶙峋的，黑黝黝皮膚的小男孩走到SUSAN面前，努住小嘴，充滿歉意地說：對不起，姐姐﹗我地冇心丫﹗對不起﹗
drama ...story....翻譯？(中轉英)))))十分難題。
2007-03-21 9:32 pm
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2007-03-26 5:39 am
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Susan lowered the head, looks at the area-wide student examination result table.Under great anger, she made an effort to make bIn the heart thought thatent the report card.,Cannot the bifurcation ﹗ not be able bifurcation ﹗ I not to be able to be this result.Late studies assiduously all is .Her movement has brought to other schoolmate's attention.Her good friend mary racket pats her to crumple the head, cared about asks her: SUSAN has not responded her, only is the ponder in the report cardMARY cared about again asked:
By now, SUSAN has stood, a person runs the classroom.She continuously along lives the staircase, runs the campus.
Susan arrives a soccer field nearby pavilion to sit down.In the heart has thousands of ideas.She did not understand why this result, does compare her to imagine misses hundred time of ﹗ her doctors to vainly hope for may realize?
“boom”.Susan Crying: !! A soccer hit has hit the susan head.Susan Good pain bifurcation ﹗ who owes hits the bifurcation? A soccer flies unexpectedly buries.Skin and bones, the shiny black skin young boy arrives in front of SUSAN, the vertical stroke lives the small mouth, the fill apology said: Sorry, the elder sister ﹗ my heart bifurcation ﹗ sorry ﹗
2007-03-21 10:03 pm
Susan bows the head, see the achievement form of the nationwide examination for graduation qualification. Under rage, she gets the song school report hard. Think in the heart: Do not know to girls! Do not know to girls! I will not be this achievement. Late late studying hard is all ¡¡
Her movements have brought other classmates' attention. Her good friend mary pats her spiral head, asks her with care: SUSAN? There is the response her , just ponder in the school report
MARY asks with care:
At this moment, SUSAN stood up, a person runs out of the jail. She has run out of the campus along living in the stair all the time .
Susan goes to the wayside pavilion near a pitch to sit down. There are ten million ideas in the heart. Why the achievement she understand, of the imagination more bad than her! Does her doctor dream of realizing?
Of " boom ". Susan cries : Too! ! A football hits the head of susan. Susan feel one's own head with hand, how it hurts the girl! Who owes and hit the girl? Unexpectedly a football flies and buries.
One becomes as emaciated as a fowl, in front of the little boy with shiny black skin goes to SUSAN, exert the small mouth, say with apology : I am sorry, elder sister! Girl of the earth's core of mine! I am sorry!
Her movements have brought other classmates' attention. Her good friend mary pats her spiral head, asks her with care: SUSAN? There is the response her , just ponder in the school report
MARY asks with care:
At this moment, SUSAN stood up, a person runs out of the jail. She has run out of the campus along living in the stair all the time .
Susan goes to the wayside pavilion near a pitch to sit down. There are ten million ideas in the heart. Why the achievement she understand, of the imagination more bad than her! Does her doctor dream of realizing?
Of " boom ". Susan cries : Too! ! A football hits the head of susan. Susan feel one's own head with hand, how it hurts the girl! Who owes and hit the girl? Unexpectedly a football flies and buries.
One becomes as emaciated as a fowl, in front of the little boy with shiny black skin goes to SUSAN, exert the small mouth, say with apology : I am sorry, elder sister! Girl of the earth's core of mine! I am sorry!
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