修改英文文法!

I think everybody could be heroes. If you devoted yourself to someone, you would become his/her hero. The real heroes should be willing to sacrifice their lives for their countries, societies and/ or other people at all cost.

" However the hero is make sacrifice ,but does not care about the harvest. "你既意思係咩?
如果你想講英雄唔計較個人利益既話, 你可以話:

For heroes, personal rewards are beyond their causes for sacrifice.

我盡力幫你改啦, 你睇下我改完岩唔岩你想表達既意思

I think everyboby has the opportunity to be a hero.If only he were devoted by the other people .He maybe a hero in that person's heart.The real hero should dare to sacrifice himself. He would like do contribution for the country,the society and people.The real hero is willing to sacrifice,but doesn't care for any rewards.

順著你的意思，我盡力而為了。

2007-03-18 21:00:27 補充：
更正：He would like do contribution → He would like doing contribution

I think everybody can become the hero only you are devoted to others .If, you do, you could be a hero in that person's heart. The real hero could sacrifice oneself and not afraid of death. They sacrifice themselves for people's contribution , the society , even the country. The hero sacrifice themselves not for harvest, but pease