可唔可以用英文簡單"番"譯下..thanks (10)快!!

我很喜歡威尼斯,這是因為它城內只有水城作為交通工具,没有現在的汽車,
I lke Venice very much. This is because in the city, people travel in waterways. Without motor vehicles,
少了空氣污染,空氣就會變得清新多了,
there is less pollution, so air is much cleaner and fresher.
而且,歐洲生活比較休閒,舒服,没有現代城市的焦急感,
Besides, the European lifestyle is one which is more leisurely where the tension typical of modern cities is just absent.
同埋,威尼斯孕育了很多成名的音樂家,
Moreover, Venice has nurtured many famous musicians.
這更使我喜愛威尼斯..
This has fascinated further about the city.
希望以後有机會可到威尼斯水城遊覽
I do hope that I will have the chance to visit this fabulous city some day.

2007-03-18 01:44:31 補充：
Typo - correction:This has fascinated me further about the city.

I like Venice very much, this is because only the waterside town is regarded as the means of transportation in its city, ? There are present automobiles,

Have lacked the air pollution , the air will become much fresher ,

And, relatively lie fallow in European life, comfortable,? There is anxious sense of modern city,

With burying, pregnant with a lot of musicians becoming famous in Venice,

This furthermore make I like Venice..

Have an opportunity to go to the waterside town of Venice to visit after hoping

2007-03-20 17:01:55 補充：
我很喜歡威尼斯,這是因為它城內只有水城作為交通工具,没有現在的汽車,少了空氣污染,空氣就會變得清新多了,而且,歐洲生活比較休閒,舒服,没有現代城市的焦急感,同埋,威尼斯孕育了很多成名的音樂家,這更使我喜愛威尼斯..希望以後有机會可到威尼斯水城遊覽

I like Venice very much, this is because only the waterside town is regarded as the means of transportation in its city, ? There are present automobiles,

Have lacked the air pollution , the air will become much fresher ,

And, relatively lie fallow in European life, comfortable,? There is anxious sense of modern city,

With burying, pregnant with a lot of musicians becoming famous in Venice,

This furthermore make I like Venice..

Have an opportunity to go to the waterside town of Venice to visit after hoping