英文難題…怎樣翻譯較佳？(20分)

這樣譯好嗎？

Looking at him, Susan smiles and says:" I'm okay, next time you play soccer, be careful!" Susan handed the soccer ball to that kid.
The kid says in all smiles:" Yes! Yes! Thanks, sister. He received the ball in his hand, ran back to the playing field and continued to play soccer. Susan really envied these eight and nine-year-olds who can play soccer without worries.

Suddenly it began to rain. The passerbys on the street begin to hide. The kids in the playing field also hide from the rain in the kiosk. They got wet, quite awkward.
One fat little boy, stroking away the raindrops on his body, says frowning:" What the heck? Only rain when we begin to play."
Another kid smiles and says:" Tomorrow will be a sunny day."
The fat little boy says questioning:"How do you know?"
A group of kids say together:"The TV also says, don't you know? There is hope in tomorrow." They laugh together.

After hearing this, Susan smiles to herself:" The kids are right, there is hope in tomorrow! This time the exams turn out bad, I can work hard, next time it will be alright!!!"

At this time, a group of kids begin to yell in excitment, the rain stopped. They happily run back to the playing field and play soccer.

SUSAN sees his appearance, smiles said: I will not have matter ﹗ you next time to play the soccer, will have to be careful ﹗ SUSAN will return that child with the handle soccer.
The child fills the smiling face to say that,Is ﹗ is ﹗ thanks the elder sister. He received in the hand the ball, runs the field, continued to kick a ball. Susan really very much envies this class 89 year old of big children, may freely play the soccer.
Suddenly, has the heavy rain. On the street person takes shelter from the rain in abundance. In the field child also arrives under the pavilion to take shelter from the rain. Their wet body, has been also distressed very.
A chubby young boy uses the hand 抺 to walk at the same time on the body rain water, at the same time the flat mouth was saying: How does ﹗ < plays the soccer only then to rain. >
Another child smiles said that,< Tomorrow could certainly be a cloudless day. >
Chubby young boy Man Mian suspected said: How < do you know? >
Group of children said together that,< The television also has said,'Hope in tomorrow.'>
they laugh together.

After Susan listens, also the understanding smiles, the child also said rightly. The hope will be bad in tomorrow ﹗ this area-wide student examination result, but she might again diligently. Next time certainly will be able to succeed!!!!
In this time, that group of child is cheering, the original rain has stopped down. They ran the field to kick a ball again happily!

2007-03-17 12:10:41 補充：
這個翻譯的英文文法一定對!

SUSAN sees his appearance, smiles said: I don't have matter wo ﹗ your next time will play the soccer, will have to be careful 1. ﹗ SUSAN will return that child with the handle soccer. The child fills the smiling face to say that, Is ﹗ is ﹗ should not the elder sister. He receives in the hand the ball, runs the field, continued to kick a ball. Susan really very much envies this class 89 year old of big children, may freely play the soccer. Suddenly, has the heavy rain. On the street person takes shelter from the rain in abundance. In the field child also walks to the pavilion under takes shelter from the rain. Their wet body, has been also distressed very. A fat all all young boy at the same time uses the hand to walk on the body rain water, at the same time ancient buries the package of mulberry place: Also no makes a mistake ﹗ another child to smile said that, Fat all all young boy Man Mien suspected said: A class of child said in once that, They laugh in once. After Susan listens, also the understanding smiles, the child also says rightly. The hope will be bad in tomorrow ﹗ this area-wide student examination result, but will be I may again diligently. Next time will be certain! ! ! ! At this time, a class of child is cheering, the original rain has stopped down. They happily ran the field to kick a ball again.

我想問你係咪想英文翻譯?(翻譯左la)

SUSAN sees his appearance, smiles said: My 冇 matter 喎 ﹗ your next time will play the soccer, will have to be careful 1. ﹗ SUSAN will return that child with the handle soccer. The child fills the smiling face to say that, Is ﹗ is ﹗ should not the elder sister. He receives in the hand the ball, runs the field, continued to kick a ball. Susan really very much envies this class 89 year old of big children, may freely play the soccer. Suddenly, has the heavy rain. On the street person takes shelter from the rain in abundance. In the field child also walks to the pavilion under takes shelter from the rain. Their wet body, has been also distressed very. A fat all all young boy at the same time uses the hand □to walk on the body rain water, at the same time ancient buries the package of mulberry place: Also 冇 makes a mistake ﹗ another child to smile said that, Fat all all young boy Man Mien suspected said: A class of child said in once that, They laugh in once. After Susan listens, also the understanding smiles, the child also says rightly. The hope will be bad in tomorrow ﹗ this area-wide student examination result, but will be I may again diligently. Next time will be certain! ! ! ! At this time, a class of child is cheering, the original rain has stopped down. They happily ran the field to kick a ball again.