翻譯一下成為英文丫?(20分題目)

2007-03-16 5:20 pm
可否翻譯一下成為英文丫?
英文要多d生字,同埋要形容較細緻(感情和動作)。
最好不重複生字!若果我的形容詞和表達意思不夠清楚,可以稍修改,以逹致更佳效果。


Susan低下頭,看住會考成績表。盛怒下,她用力弄曲了成績單。心中想:不會丫﹗不會丫﹗我不會係這個成績。晚晚的苦讀都係咁……
她的動作引起了其他同學的注意。她的好友mary拍拍她的摶頭,關心地問她: SUSAN没有回應她,只是沉思在成績單上
MARY再關心地問:
這時,SUSAN站了起來,一個人跑出班房。她一直沿住樓梯,跑出校園。

Susan走到一個足球場附近的涼亭坐下。心中有千萬個想法。她不明白為何這個成績,比她想像中差百倍﹗她的醫生夢想可以實現嗎?

“boom”一聲。Susan大叫一聲:矣也!! 一個足球打中了susan的頭。Susan用手摸摸自己的頭,好痛丫﹗誰欠打丫?竟然一個足球飛埋來。

一個瘦骨嶙峋的,黑黝黝皮膚的小男孩走到SUSAN面前,努住小嘴,充滿歉意地說:對不起,姐姐﹗我地冇心丫﹗對不起﹗

回答 (3)

2007-03-23 2:10 am
✔ 最佳答案
Susan lowered her head, staring at her HKCEE report. Under immense fury, she violently twisted the report card with all her might. She thought, manically, “No, no, I should not have ended up with these results! I have spent numerous sleepless nights arduously revising...” Her face contorted into an expression of pure bitterness and hatred of herself.
Susan低下頭,看住會考成績表。盛怒下,她用力弄曲了成績單。心中想:不會丫﹗不會丫﹗我不會係這個成績。晚晚的苦讀都係咁……

Her immoderate actions caught the attention of her other classmates. Her good friend Mary patted her shoulder, and asked with genuine concern, “Are you alright, Susan?”
Susan did not answer her—her report card was at the very center of her mind, and she could only focus on that. Mary asked again, affable face filled with worry, “Susan, Susan, what's the matter? Are you okay?”
她的動作引起了其他同學的注意。她的好友mary拍拍她的摶頭,關心地問她: SUSAN没有回應她,只是沉思在成績單上
MARY再關心地問:

At this, Susan stood up abruptly and darted out of the classroom brusquely, alone. She ran, passing through the corridor, sprinting along the staircase, and finally all the way out of the school.
這時,SUSAN站了起來,一個人跑出班房。她一直沿住樓梯,跑出校園。

Susan went to a pavilion near a soccer field and sat down, thousands of thoughts crossing her mind. She didn't understand why she got this result—it was worse than she had ever dreamed of, hundreds of times worse! Would her aspiration of being a doctor ever be realized? Would she become jobless and poor instead?
Susan走到一個足球場附近的涼亭坐下。心中有千萬個想法。她不明白為何這個成績,比她想像中差百倍﹗她的醫生夢想可以實現嗎?

“Boom!” Out of nowhere, a soccer ball smacked Susan square on her forehead. “OWWWW!!!!” Susan yelped. “That hurts! Who had the guts to do this to me? You shouldn’t hurl soccer balls at other people!” she growled angrily, irritation creeping up her face, her tears momentarily forgotten.
“boom”一聲。Susan大叫一聲:矣也!! 一個足球打中了susan的頭。Susan用手摸摸自己的頭,好痛丫﹗誰欠打丫?竟然一個足球飛埋來。

A tanned little boy with a lanky, emaciated frame shambled over to Susan timidly, pouting, and said apologetically, “I'm so sorry, miss! We didn't mean to hit you on the head! Sorry again!”
一個瘦骨嶙峋的,黑黝黝皮膚的小男孩走到SUSAN面前,努住小嘴,充滿歉意地說:對不起,姐姐﹗我地冇心丫﹗對不起﹗
參考: me
2007-03-22 9:53 pm
Lowering her head, Susan read her HKCEE report card intently. She scrunched it up, raw anger boiling inside her, she wanted to scream out loud, "No, No! This can't happen to me! I studied day and night for it, without getting a wink of sleep!" Her extreme behavior caught her classmates' attention. Her best friend Mary patted her shoulder, and asked with concern:
Susan did not respond, her mind wholly and solely on her report.
Mary inquired again:
Susan suddenly stood up and dashed out of the classroom, along the stairs, all the way out of the school.

Susan sat down in a sheltered area near a football field. A thousand thoughts in her mind. She didn't understand why she got this result, it was a hundred times worse than in her wildest dreams. Can she still pursue her dream as becoming a doctor?

"Boom" Susan screamed, "Ouch!" A football hit Susan flat on the head. Susan touched her head gingerly, " That hurts! Who dared to do that? Where did that football come from?:

A withering, tanned little boy approached Susan, pouting guiltily and apologized, "Sorry! I didn't mean it!"
參考: me
2007-03-16 5:28 pm
Under Susan is low, looks at the area-wide student examination result table. Under the great anger, she made an effort to make bent the report card. In the heart thought that, Cannot the bifurcation ﹗ not be able bifurcation ﹗ I not to be able to be this result. Late studies assiduously all so... ... Her movement has brought to other schoolmates' attentions. Her good friend mary racket pats her to crumple the head, nicely asks her: SUSAN □has responds her, only is the ponder MARY nicely asked again in the report card: By now, SUSAN has stood, a person runs the classroom. She continuously along lives the staircase, runs the campus. Susan walks to a soccer field nearby pavilion sits down. In the heart has surely an idea. She did not understand why this result, does compare her to imagine misses hundred time of ﹗ her doctors to vainly hope for may realize? "boom". Susan cries: ! ! A soccer hit has hit the susan head. Susan traces own with the hand head, good pain bifurcation ﹗ who owes hits the bifurcation? Unexpectedly a soccer flies buries. Skin and bones, the shiny black skin young boy walks to SUSAN in front of, the vertical stroke lives the small mouth, fills the apology to say: Sorry, elder sister ﹗ we do not have the heart bifurcation ﹗ sorry ﹗


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